"Cup of Smiles"
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Movement of Reality (A)"Poetry at his finest.
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Comment from SHABAMO
Great poem. The escape from slavery lines are the ones I liked the most. The contrast between heavenly bodies and earthly sensuality are strong. Well done as always Ricky.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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Great poem. The escape from slavery lines are the ones I liked the most. The contrast between heavenly bodies and earthly sensuality are strong. Well done as always Ricky.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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Thanks SHABAMO.
Yes, for taking the time to review this and you're amazing comments.
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Comment from Courtney Louk
Amazing work. Deep and vivacious. Description of letting go and the freedom that follows living in heaven. Spending eternity with God. I don't see any thing wrong with this.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021
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Amazing work. Deep and vivacious. Description of letting go and the freedom that follows living in heaven. Spending eternity with God. I don't see any thing wrong with this.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021
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Why thank you very much Courtney for stopping by and picking up on this one.
I write in journal for sometimes my grief and pain
of past circumstances.
But sometimes I write for the sheer pleasure of it like with this one.
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