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"Cup of Smiles"

Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Gratitude in Motion(Cont)"
Poetry at his finest.

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Comment from Lulube
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What a traumatized ordeal to go through. Biking can be so dangerous, especially if there are no bike lanes. I hate to say it but I can't wait for part 2. you ended this part 1 in an erxact cliffhanger spot.

lulube

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2021

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
    True.
    I'm actually creating the ending now.
    Ricky
reply by Lulube on 31-Aug-2021
    don't rush it though

    lulube
Comment from Eunice Amero
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This was a well written poem and sad. Why would anyone and not stop. Thats coldhearted. I want to see the other part. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2021

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
    Thanks and I'm actually creating the ending now.
    Ricky
reply by Eunice Amero on 31-Aug-2021
    OK let me know and you are welcome
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021