Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Beautiful image. Where
did you fine it?
-A very nice presentation.
-A good topic and
descriptive nature imagery
that paints a picture of
life in the forest.
-You have a good message
at the end, but it has 9 syllables.
-Otherwise a very good entry; good luck.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021

I checked on two syllable counter sites; "isn't" is a one syllable word. Thanks for your read and review. Much appreciated.

reply by Pam (respa) on 28-Aug-2021

You're welcome.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent 2-4-6-8 poem for the contest
with excellent description and a good question
that few can answer.
Beautiful art work to match.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021

Thank you for your read and your review. Very encouraging.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your image choice is beautiful, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Your words are well chosen and give readers much to think about.
Your syllable count may be correct, but I'm wondering about the word 'isn't.' Are you sure it is one syllable?

forest
a tranquil world
no rancor or malice ~
why isn't our human world the same?

Maybe ~
why isn't mankind's world the same?

Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021

I used a syllable counter. It said isn't is a one syllable word. Hope it is correct. Thank you for the read and the kind review.

reply by Jannypan (Jan) on 27-Aug-2021

I was just wondering as there has been discussion in the past about that word. 😊

reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021

I checked on two syllable counter sites both say isn't is one syllable.