Heart Crafted Poems -2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Cathedral in Nature"Musings of an old man -2021
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Comment from LisaMay
Being in nature is definitely awareness of a God moment. Your church is majestic and awe-inspiring.
Referring to stained glass and a chalice keep religious imagery in your nature-scape.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Being in nature is definitely awareness of a God moment. Your church is majestic and awe-inspiring.
Referring to stained glass and a chalice keep religious imagery in your nature-scape.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Thanks Lisa May
Comment from Wendy G
This is beautifully written and so very lyrical with words celebrating the beauty of nature as well as its delicacy and power. Worship is due to the "Creator of all things big and small". Well done. Very best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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This is beautifully written and so very lyrical with words celebrating the beauty of nature as well as its delicacy and power. Worship is due to the "Creator of all things big and small". Well done. Very best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Wendy thanks for your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine free-write and I feel exactly the same when I walk through the park and witness nature at its best. It is sheer joy to breath in the air and see the flowers, trees and wildlife and it always fills me with awe. I really enjoyed your rich descriptions here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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A fine free-write and I feel exactly the same when I walk through the park and witness nature at its best. It is sheer joy to breath in the air and see the flowers, trees and wildlife and it always fills me with awe. I really enjoyed your rich descriptions here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Thank you for your comments.
Comment from lyenochka
You're so right that all of nature speaks of the Creator and we can feel the Lord's presence in all that He created.
I liked your unusual verb of "upping" for the raising of hands, and the use of internal rhyme (pray and play) and alliteration.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment:
each Sunday -- into natures cathedral, (nature's)
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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You're so right that all of nature speaks of the Creator and we can feel the Lord's presence in all that He created.
I liked your unusual verb of "upping" for the raising of hands, and the use of internal rhyme (pray and play) and alliteration.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment:
each Sunday -- into natures cathedral, (nature's)
Comment Written 27-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Thanks for the heads-up.
Comment from Midi O'Rourke
Eeeeek. You misspelled the title.
This is a wonderfully written poem. It is a clear picture of the majesty of nature. It is a blessing to realize the connection of spirituality with nature. It is truly magnificent and inspiring.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Eeeeek. You misspelled the title.
This is a wonderfully written poem. It is a clear picture of the majesty of nature. It is a blessing to realize the connection of spirituality with nature. It is truly magnificent and inspiring.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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EEEEK Phat finger flop 😊🙏 thanks
Comment from l.raven
such a beautiful church...I love
the way you described the beauty of your
church...the way you can feel Gods presents...
we our all so blessed to be able to see
God's creation of Mother Natures Cathedral...
I love your poem...and am so sorry I don't have a six for you...******...very beautifully written...and I love your picture...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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such a beautiful church...I love
the way you described the beauty of your
church...the way you can feel Gods presents...
we our all so blessed to be able to see
God's creation of Mother Natures Cathedral...
I love your poem...and am so sorry I don't have a six for you...******...very beautifully written...and I love your picture...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Linda, Wow! Thanks for the validation! 🙏
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your so very welcome... God Bless...love xxoo
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Wow poet. This is stunningly beautiful. This is what I call poetry!
Every line is but a work of art.
My favorite stanza...
"As a fine mist falls gently from the heavens,
moving through the sun's rays, a dazzling brilliance of colors,
liken to a skyscape seen through a thousand stained glass arches
consumes the azure horizon." - wow. So very beautiful.
This would have made a great faith poem entry as well.
So sorry I'm out of sixes. Please accept a virtual one.
Good luck in the contest!
Katiemae Dead
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Wow poet. This is stunningly beautiful. This is what I call poetry!
Every line is but a work of art.
My favorite stanza...
"As a fine mist falls gently from the heavens,
moving through the sun's rays, a dazzling brilliance of colors,
liken to a skyscape seen through a thousand stained glass arches
consumes the azure horizon." - wow. So very beautiful.
This would have made a great faith poem entry as well.
So sorry I'm out of sixes. Please accept a virtual one.
Good luck in the contest!
Katiemae Dead
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Katiemae Dead, II am so very grateful for your sweet and kind validation.
Comment from dragonpoet
Church is not just the building mentioned in the title. It is the beauty of nature which is awesome to behold. It can be inspiring of prayer and praise.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Church is not just the building mentioned in the title. It is the beauty of nature which is awesome to behold. It can be inspiring of prayer and praise.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Thanks Joan
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No problem.
Joan
Comment from Janet Foor
The Cathedral of God's ever evolving tapestry of Life is a beautiful line.
I enjoyed reading your poem describing the many facets of a cathedral in nature.
Well done.
blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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The Cathedral of God's ever evolving tapestry of Life is a beautiful line.
I enjoyed reading your poem describing the many facets of a cathedral in nature.
Well done.
blessings
Janet
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Janet, thank you for your review. 🙏
Comment from royowen
Of course a church is a place of the faithful gathering to worship God. A tabernacle where hopefully the presence of God welcomes and communes with his People. But the blue sky above, and creation's surrounds can be that place. In which you've described beautifully that place. A place built by God's hands. Beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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Of course a church is a place of the faithful gathering to worship God. A tabernacle where hopefully the presence of God welcomes and communes with his People. But the blue sky above, and creation's surrounds can be that place. In which you've described beautifully that place. A place built by God's hands. Beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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Thank you Roy! I trust all is well 🙏
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My life is fine, as I pray yours is dear friend,
