Heart Crafted Poems -2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Cathedral in Nature"Musings of an old man -2021
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Comment from Janilou
So beautiful and well written. I loved the gorgeous picture you painted with your words. Thank you for sharing this. I'm in the hospital right now battling Covid so it's wonderful reading such uplifting work!
Jan
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2021
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So beautiful and well written. I loved the gorgeous picture you painted with your words. Thank you for sharing this. I'm in the hospital right now battling Covid so it's wonderful reading such uplifting work!
Jan
Comment Written 27-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2021
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Jan I am so sadden read of your health issue. Know that I am sending you prayers for the Highest and Best for you to use as you use for your best needs for as full recovery,🙏
Comment from karenina
Six worthy! Alas, It's Friday and I am a poor budgeter. Nonetheless, this is my preferred church as well... I go to nature to become closest with God.
Your writing is polished and emotive and reverential all at once. Loved this line especially: "I just know there is a God moment developing."--
Superb write which I suspect will do very well in this contest!
Karenina
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2021
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Six worthy! Alas, It's Friday and I am a poor budgeter. Nonetheless, this is my preferred church as well... I go to nature to become closest with God.
Your writing is polished and emotive and reverential all at once. Loved this line especially: "I just know there is a God moment developing."--
Superb write which I suspect will do very well in this contest!
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2021
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Karenina, Wow! Thank you I am pleased that we are kindred in Spirit,
I love virtual sixes ...🙏🙏
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Wish I had the "real" ones to give! One of these weeks I'm absolutely going to "save" some for the end of the week...
Sigh..............................
Karenina
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Cathedral in Nature
A fine entry for the Church contest. I like the metaphor of nature and God. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2021
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Cathedral in Nature
A fine entry for the Church contest. I like the metaphor of nature and God. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2021
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Gypsy Blue Rose, thank you for partaking of my free verse celebration of Nature, God and my Sanctuary 🙏
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello unknown author
your free verse about your church
Cathedral in Nature
I really like of you described the beauty of moter nature being a
Cathedral. Your free verse flowed like gentle stream flowing with ease. And what you make a delight to see and feel
its your my church ...
you play and pray within.
Gert
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Hello unknown author
your free verse about your church
Cathedral in Nature
I really like of you described the beauty of moter nature being a
Cathedral. Your free verse flowed like gentle stream flowing with ease. And what you make a delight to see and feel
its your my church ...
you play and pray within.
Gert
Comment Written 27-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Gert, thank you for reading and commenting on this free verse. 🙏
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I want to join you on your next stop here. It sounds amazing and I'm so glad you are able to be close to such a beauty. I think sometimes we forget how beautiful the world is around us.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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I want to join you on your next stop here. It sounds amazing and I'm so glad you are able to be close to such a beauty. I think sometimes we forget how beautiful the world is around us.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much! I value your thoughts, have a splendid weekend!
Comment from E. Denison
Exceptional work here, mystery poet. I have always liked the notion of nature, being in nature and surrounded by it, as a sort of religious/spiritual experience. You have created some wonderful lines here and the paired image is appropriate. Well done! Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Exceptional work here, mystery poet. I have always liked the notion of nature, being in nature and surrounded by it, as a sort of religious/spiritual experience. You have created some wonderful lines here and the paired image is appropriate. Well done! Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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E. Denison, thank you so very much! WOW a six star offering is humbling, be well! 🙏🙏
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written poem you have penned for the church contest. You used great descriptive and heart felt words and very nice imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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This is a very beautiful and well written poem you have penned for the church contest. You used great descriptive and heart felt words and very nice imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 27-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Teri, thank you for the review and comments and well wishes 🙏
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you are so welcome! blessings!
Comment from Begin Again
Outstanding and I have no six to give. I believe God's creation of nature is far more impressive and moving than any brick and mortar building could be. Walking with nature surrounding us should open our hearts and minds to his love and all that should believe.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Outstanding and I have no six to give. I believe God's creation of nature is far more impressive and moving than any brick and mortar building could be. Walking with nature surrounding us should open our hearts and minds to his love and all that should believe.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 27-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Carol, I love the thought of getting your virtual six, it is so valued, thanks 🙏
Comment from Janetsue
I have had this same reverent feeling while walking through the woods alone in communion with the Lord. His glory is all around and I marvel at the beautiful variety of His wondrous creation. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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I have had this same reverent feeling while walking through the woods alone in communion with the Lord. His glory is all around and I marvel at the beautiful variety of His wondrous creation. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the review and well wishes on this poems success.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
When most people hear the word church they probably think of a building. Maybe it is a fancy building or a simple building where believers gather. But a church is much more than a building.it is all about the people. I enjoyed your imagery, your emotional words and the spiritual content. Good luck!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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When most people hear the word church they probably think of a building. Maybe it is a fancy building or a simple building where believers gather. But a church is much more than a building.it is all about the people. I enjoyed your imagery, your emotional words and the spiritual content. Good luck!
Comment Written 27-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Thank you for your review - Namaste 🙏
