Apple Of God's Eye
Phrase inspired poem8 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Yes, He has placed the seeds of love and grace in our hearts to use to help others and ourselves on the way through life. This shows your faith well and fits the contest perfectly. Good luck.
This seems to be a rhyming free verse poem.
Keep writing and stay healthy
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2021
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Yes, He has placed the seeds of love and grace in our hearts to use to help others and ourselves on the way through life. This shows your faith well and fits the contest perfectly. Good luck.
This seems to be a rhyming free verse poem.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2021
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Thanks for your review.
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No problem, Patricia.
Joan
Comment from MAMONIA
This is a lovely poem. I was wondering if in the first line you meant the
"apple of the eye of God." Am I wrong?
I enjoyed reading this and like the image you put there. It is perfect.
I will be checking in on you from now on.
Have a great weekend.
Marie
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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This is a lovely poem. I was wondering if in the first line you meant the
"apple of the eye of God." Am I wrong?
I enjoyed reading this and like the image you put there. It is perfect.
I will be checking in on you from now on.
Have a great weekend.
Marie
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Thank you Marie, for your review. Yes I meant the wording in line one.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Fine faithful words Patricia and I hope you are doing well and enjoying life. Your faithful is always with you, a joy to read, make today the best ever, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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Fine faithful words Patricia and I hope you are doing well and enjoying life. Your faithful is always with you, a joy to read, make today the best ever, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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Thank you Dolly, for your lovely review.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is a wonderful uplifting poem, Patricia, particularly in troubled times.
We need to be reminded to have faith in Him as He loves us.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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This is a wonderful uplifting poem, Patricia, particularly in troubled times.
We need to be reminded to have faith in Him as He loves us.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards,
Mary
Comment Written 25-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review, Mary.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a lovely poem. It is wonderful to be consider the apple of God eye. It will be lovely to see him face to face and to be able to meet all thos Christian friend we've connected with over the years.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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This is a lovely poem. It is wonderful to be consider the apple of God eye. It will be lovely to see him face to face and to be able to meet all thos Christian friend we've connected with over the years.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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Thank you Beth, for your lovely review.
Comment from Janetsue
This is a beautiful faith message, my friend. The world is in such a terrible turmoil, I am praying for revival. I believe that is the only hope it has for survival. Forever blessings, Janet
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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This is a beautiful faith message, my friend. The world is in such a terrible turmoil, I am praying for revival. I believe that is the only hope it has for survival. Forever blessings, Janet
Comment Written 25-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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Thank you for your thoughtful review, Spangle.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem has a great and true message, Patricia. I enjoyed reading it. I love the illustration, there's smooth flow to your well thought out words, the Bible verse is awesome, and the use of seeds, apple, core, relate well to your theme.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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Your poem has a great and true message, Patricia. I enjoyed reading it. I love the illustration, there's smooth flow to your well thought out words, the Bible verse is awesome, and the use of seeds, apple, core, relate well to your theme.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 25-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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Thank you Jan, for a thoughtful review. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Anne Johnston
That is a beautiful scripture that you have used as inspiration for your poem. When we realize how much the Lord loves us, then we can appreciate all that He as done for us. I like the line: "He's placed in us the seeds of mercy and grace."
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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That is a beautiful scripture that you have used as inspiration for your poem. When we realize how much the Lord loves us, then we can appreciate all that He as done for us. I like the line: "He's placed in us the seeds of mercy and grace."
Comment Written 25-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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Thanks Anne, for your very thoughtful review.
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You are welcome
