Believe In Yourself
Things We Can Believe In15 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Wow, this is superb! Each verse builds on the previous one and the impact is great! Inspiring and encouraging to the max! The flow, meter, and rhymes are well done and written well, also. The presentation is marvelous, with a wonderful quote from Eleanor Roosevelt that resonates with me totally. Especially today, because I had a dream this morning with a lucidity that told me how to go further in my life. I believe in the power of dreamwork. And in the power of believing in yourself. Thank you so much for this inspirational post. It has brightened up my afternoon considerably.
Best wishes and good luck with the contest. You are a sure winner!
Jesse
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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Wow, this is superb! Each verse builds on the previous one and the impact is great! Inspiring and encouraging to the max! The flow, meter, and rhymes are well done and written well, also. The presentation is marvelous, with a wonderful quote from Eleanor Roosevelt that resonates with me totally. Especially today, because I had a dream this morning with a lucidity that told me how to go further in my life. I believe in the power of dreamwork. And in the power of believing in yourself. Thank you so much for this inspirational post. It has brightened up my afternoon considerably.
Best wishes and good luck with the contest. You are a sure winner!
Jesse
Comment Written 25-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much!
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You are welcome, oh, anonymous one.
Jesse
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Awesome! This is a beautiful uplifting poem
For the contest. Very well put together. It has a nice flow and rhyme scheme. Love your photo it compliments your poem well. I always loved that quote the future belong to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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Awesome! This is a beautiful uplifting poem
For the contest. Very well put together. It has a nice flow and rhyme scheme. Love your photo it compliments your poem well. I always loved that quote the future belong to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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Thanks!
Comment from royowen
Oh yes I believe! Although I have soulish stumbles from time to time, but God put the bullets back in the gun, He gave me belie, not in myself so much, but up in the source of it all, and a hope to carry on without addiction and stand on my faith in Him who tells me I'm worth dying for! This an excellent work, full of positives and the great thing is, it is verified. The rhythm is sublime, the smooth hexametric stanzas are perfect, with aabb rhyming, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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Oh yes I believe! Although I have soulish stumbles from time to time, but God put the bullets back in the gun, He gave me belie, not in myself so much, but up in the source of it all, and a hope to carry on without addiction and stand on my faith in Him who tells me I'm worth dying for! This an excellent work, full of positives and the great thing is, it is verified. The rhythm is sublime, the smooth hexametric stanzas are perfect, with aabb rhyming, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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Thanks very much!
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Thanks very much!
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My pleasure
Comment from Karen Estep
I love the last line, "I'm free to be me"! This became my Montra last year when I turned 60. God helped me understand that believing is key component to a happy life. Keep writing! Everyone needs these words of wisdom!
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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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I love the last line, "I'm free to be me"! This became my Montra last year when I turned 60. God helped me understand that believing is key component to a happy life. Keep writing! Everyone needs these words of wisdom!
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Comment Written 25-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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I will, thanks!
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I will, thanks!
Comment from Sally Law
FanStory fantabulous! I feel so uplifted after reading your sunny poem! You have succeeded mightily. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs....
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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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FanStory fantabulous! I feel so uplifted after reading your sunny poem! You have succeeded mightily. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs....
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Comment Written 25-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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Thank you.
