A Special Place
Passion takes us to....8 total reviews
Comment from Mimi Linny
This is a a lovely and tastefully written poetry piece on the passion of love. Rhyme is wonderful and with one little suggested tweak the rhythm adds to a perfect flow. My suggestion is the 4th line of the third stanza... instead of using "suddenly," I might suggest replacing it with "For that's when..." or "And that's when..." It may be just the way I'm reading it, but the word "suddenly" places accent on the 1st syllable of the word and to me, it would be a smoother line if the accent is on the third syllable of the line (or the word "when"). Good luck in the contest. This is definitely my favorite!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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This is a a lovely and tastefully written poetry piece on the passion of love. Rhyme is wonderful and with one little suggested tweak the rhythm adds to a perfect flow. My suggestion is the 4th line of the third stanza... instead of using "suddenly," I might suggest replacing it with "For that's when..." or "And that's when..." It may be just the way I'm reading it, but the word "suddenly" places accent on the 1st syllable of the word and to me, it would be a smoother line if the accent is on the third syllable of the line (or the word "when"). Good luck in the contest. This is definitely my favorite!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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Thank you for this nice review and for the helpful suggestion. I'll reread it. :)
Comment from Wendy G
This is a well written outline of passionate love. It flows smoothly and well and the rhyming is also smooth and unforced. The image of a landscape is a good choice. Well done and best wishes.
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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This is a well written outline of passionate love. It flows smoothly and well and the rhyming is also smooth and unforced. The image of a landscape is a good choice. Well done and best wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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Thank you for this great review. :)
Comment from Bonnie Seach
The poem is indeed compliant with contest requirements!
The presentation graphically adheres to the "black and white" prompt.
Rhyming and rhythm are excellent. The format is of a high standard and the words are artfully contrived for the pinnacle embrace.
Thank you for sharing
Best wishes for the contest
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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The poem is indeed compliant with contest requirements!
The presentation graphically adheres to the "black and white" prompt.
Rhyming and rhythm are excellent. The format is of a high standard and the words are artfully contrived for the pinnacle embrace.
Thank you for sharing
Best wishes for the contest
Comment Written 25-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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Thank you for such a terrific review. :)
Comment from Carmen Ducharme
Beautifully written poem .I enjoyed reading it very much perfect for the contest I received the massage loud and clear without any vulgar ! Nice job ! Good luck in the contest!
reply by Carmen Ducharme on 25-Aug-2021
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Beautifully written poem .I enjoyed reading it very much perfect for the contest I received the massage loud and clear without any vulgar ! Nice job ! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2021
reply by Carmen Ducharme on 25-Aug-2021
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I meant message lol maybe I was so excited I was thinking about a massage lol
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
To comment on love poems is somewhat a little embarrassing when it's get's a person blushing. Love is a gift from God. Love can't be described. It has no shape, it has no form. Love is not an object. It is a feeling.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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To comment on love poems is somewhat a little embarrassing when it's get's a person blushing. Love is a gift from God. Love can't be described. It has no shape, it has no form. Love is not an object. It is a feeling.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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Everything you say is true. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my poem. :)
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a beautifully written poem. The sentiment is eloquently expressed and suggests rather than blares the direction that it takes. Great rhyme scheme. The rhythm is smooth and sensual. Your imagery is vivid without being in your face. Very well done.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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This is a beautifully written poem. The sentiment is eloquently expressed and suggests rather than blares the direction that it takes. Great rhyme scheme. The rhythm is smooth and sensual. Your imagery is vivid without being in your face. Very well done.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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Thank you for this terrific review, you don't know how much it means to me. :)
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You are very welcome.
Comment from WriterHeather
I'm absolutely in love with this passionate love poem you have penned for the contest. Your rhythm is spot on and it is very sensual without being vulgar. I am very impressed
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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I'm absolutely in love with this passionate love poem you have penned for the contest. Your rhythm is spot on and it is very sensual without being vulgar. I am very impressed
Comment Written 25-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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Thank you, I'm so excited that you liked my poem. :)
Comment from RodG
A nicely done poem about barely suppressed passion. The Speaker describes how his lover's landscape is irresistible. You give us just enough details to kindle our imaginations.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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A nicely done poem about barely suppressed passion. The Speaker describes how his lover's landscape is irresistible. You give us just enough details to kindle our imaginations.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
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Thank you for this nice review.. as always it's very appreciated. :)
