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Sisters Are Forever

Diane passed May 5th 2021

63 total reviews 
Comment from JennStar
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Thank you for sharing your story and your sister's poetry. Loved both of the poems. The author's notes was also great. Have you thought about turning some of the stories with your sister into short stories?

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
    Hi Jenn, yes I have...but I'm not the best writer of stories...LOL...my punctuation skills stink...LOL...
    Thank You sweet girl for a wonderful review...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by JennStar on 24-Aug-2021
    I am very dyslexic and grammar has always been my enemy. I just keep working at it and hope I get better. One thing that helped me was deciding the technical can be worked on but those stories that are inside deserve to be told.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
    Thank You...I have thought about it...have a wonderful day...love xxoo
Comment from dellsworthpoet
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A touching homage to your sister.

The poem has a fun yet reverent feel. The words speak of fond memories. I love the fact that you included your sister's poem.

A simple and heartfelt poem. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
    Hi dellsworthpoet, my sister had a rough life...so I'm glad we stayed close...Thank You for a wonderful review...and you are so very welcome...love Linda xxoo
reply by dellsworthpoet on 23-Aug-2021
    My review was heartfelt and you are welcome.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
    smiling big...love xxoo
Comment from amahra
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I liked the story just as well as I liked both poems. Like hearing about your sister; I didn't want to stop reading. I wanted more. I love the artwork of the two little girls, it's precious.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
    Hi Amahra, Thank You my sweet friend for a wonderful review...
    she did have a rough life...right when you thought things were getting better...they fell apart again...

    Thank You for a wonderful review...and I love the picture as well...hair color is almost perfect...God Bless sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from damommy
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I am so sorry for you loss. I know first hand the grief and pain you're suffering. What wonderful memories you have to carry on. She will always be with you in your heart.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
    Hi Yvonne, it truly is so hard to loss someone you love...
    when you think you will be ok...just a song...a memory brings you to tears...I wish she were her...but she is out of mental and physical pain now...

    Thank You for a wonderful review sweet girl...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from nomi338
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This is a beautiful heartwarming story of love between siblings. I have two older sisters, one deceased, the other is still alive thank God. We did not get along very well together until I finally grew up. How do you tell a sister who continually went out of her way to prove how much she loved you, as you stand staring down at her cold, still body, beating yourself up inside because when you had the chance you missed it and now it is far too late. I try to make up for it with my oldest sister, but it is just not the same.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
    Hi Nolan, no matter how siblings bond sweet guy...there is still
    a unbreakable bond...good or bad...they are your blood...and your sister knew that...there are a lot of brothers and sisters that don't talk for years...but are remembered at the time of death...you will see your sister again...in the right place...and in the right time...and all anger will be just a memory...

    Thank you sweet guy for a wonderful review...and all your love stars...love to you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Sally Law
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This is just precious. What a gift to have each other. I'm very protective of my sister, Suzanne, nicknamed Suzy. We loved to climb trees and swing together. I usually pushed since I'm four years older. I'm so sorry for your great loss, sweet Linda.

A rough [draft].

I love you dear. Beautiful offering and tribute for Diane. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo....xoxo

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
    Hi Sally, Thank You so much for your kind words...
    I think sweet girl most sisters do protect their sisters...
    Diane just had such a hard life...and I wanted to make it easier...

    Thank You for a wonderful review my sweet friend...
    and all my best to you as well...love you much lovely lady...Linda xxoo
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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I'm sorry about your sister. I was really close with my sister for the first 19 years of my life and then our relationship became toxic. I still mourn our relationship and what we use to have. I wish you could have had more time with your sister. Big hugs.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
    Hi Meghan, so good to see you you sweet girl...
    Thank You so much for your kind words....

    I'm sorry you and your sister relationship is bad my sweet friend...my sister and I had our ups and downs...but nothing that word hurt our love for each other...I pray one day you and your sister will start talking again...

    I wish My sister and I could talk just one more time..I have so
    much I want to tell her...sigh...

    Thank you so much for a wonderful review...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from royowen
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I love the devotion between my two daughters, temperamentally they are perfectly matched, they sometimes never have to talk, there's an unbreakable bond. My elder daughter said of their relationship, "We get one another" that's why I loved this poem dear Linda, excellently written, dear, your dear sister was so talented, as are you. Well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
    Hi Roy, I always knew what my sister was thinking from the expressions on her face...she didn't have to laugh...she get these hilarious looks on her face...

    and your daughters are right...they get one another...

    Thank You for a wonderful review my sweet friend...
    she did have a talent for writing...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Beejay
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This is truly beautiful, Diane sounds like an amazing sister, and the time you had together must have been very precious . I also like how you have presented your post with the two poems followed by the very interesting
And entertaining notes.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
    Hi Beejay, she was an amazing sister...I miss her so much...
    Thank you so much sweet girl for a wonderful review...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Oh my friend, you were blessed indeed. I am so sorry for your loss. Some grief never really ends, I think, it just gets a little longer between the waves of sorrow.
Thank you for sharing this exquisite piece. Your sister had a wonderful talent.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
    Hi Dawn, Thank You for all your kind words sweet angel...
    for me the waves were to short...

    I lost my Mom March 12th 2021, seven weeks later I lost Diane (sister)May 5th 2021...and we loss my daughters dog of 16 years
    on May 14th 2021...and my best friends husband passed on May 31st...and my friend from church called and told me a couple weeks later...my friend Janet who sit by me in my bible study class passed four days ago...way to much at one time...it was overwhelming...I stayed close to God...and He has helped get through...the pain is still there...but I'm taking it one day at a time...

    Thank You my sweet friend for a wonderful review...and allll your so lovely stars...

    and yes Diane truly was a talented writer...and you are so very welcome...love you lots...Linda xxoo
reply by Dawn Munro on 26-Aug-2021
    Oh dear heavens, I am so sorry! How unbelievably hard for you -- my sincere condolences, Linda.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    Thank You Angel...I try to remember there's a reason for everything...just seems the older I get...the more people around me pass away...God truly does help...I know He hears my prayers Dawn...when the pain gets to bad...I pray...and you can feel the pain ease away...always...just one day at a time...when you think you have it bad...some else has it worse...love you my sweet friend...xxoo Thank You..
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    Thank You Angel...I try to remember there's a reason for everything...just seems the older I get...the more people around me pass away...God truly does help...I know He hears my prayers Dawn...when the pain gets to bad...I pray...and you can feel the pain ease away...always...just one day at a time...when you think you have it bad...some else has it worse...love you my sweet friend...xxoo Thank You..