Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

Great story! Which chapter is this in your book? Or perhaps, I should say, which book is it from? I'm hooked and I want the next installment. I love reading and writing this genre and you do it so well. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021

Thank you, Mary :)
I appreciate your kind words and generous review. This is the sixth book in my Novels of the Breedline series. Hopefully, it will be finished by the end of this year. If you're interested, my books are sold on Amazon, B&N or shanacongrove.com
I will have to take a look at your work as well. Hope to hear from you again.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by Mary Shifman on 26-Aug-2021

Thank you. I am interested.

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

I really don't think the vampirish girls really stand a chance, but Michaels is incredibly cunning as well as as nutty as a fruit cake. Just love these stories, but perhaps Fiona has a trick up her sleeve, or an accident will happen, but you are really creative, as you've shown with your marvellous collection of stories displays. Another wonderful edition to your amazing library dear Shana, excellent job, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021

Thank you, dear friend :)
This one took me a while to write, but it was tense and fun to create. There's always a villain among all the Breedline. Life for them can't just be so easy. Otherwise, there would be no more stories to tell. With the good comes the bad just like in real life.

Thanks for always encouraging me. It makes a difference.
Always your fan,
Shana :)

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

This is another action-packed episode. I enjoy it. YOu have definitely given all-you-can-eat buffet a new meaning.

In the following sentence:
"Please, Henry," Fiona pleaded around her sobs.

Is it correct to end the dialogue in a comma? (after Henry.)

I know you use a comma when the person is saying. But Plead is a similar word.

Well done.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021

Thank you, Lisa :)

Glad you enjoyed the chapter. And thanks for taking the time to read it. I definitely enjoyed creating this one.
I see your point about the part where it ends in a comma at Fiona pleaded around her sobs. Thanks for pointing that out.

Hope to hear from you again. More Breedline adventures to come.
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from AJ McCall

Exceptional

WHAT?! BITERS? What a twist, Shana! I had figured though from the previous chapter when they had started talking about it that one or THIRTY of them would appear somewhere. (I knew something was up when they found the guards' bodies.) But I'm sure the Breedlie can handle them, but will they save Fiona in time is the real question. Oh, my gosh I can't wait to see what happens next. And I have to say, this chapter was a good length too. I hope that Doctor Henry pays for what he's done....

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021

Thanks so much, AJ :)

Yes... we have Biters! Hee-hee! :)
This chapter was so much fun to create. I will definitely say this, the Breedline have their work cut out for them. These little fanged teens are like a group of wild cats. Good thing the Breedline are supernatural. The next chapter will have a lot of action.

Thanks for all your support! I look forward to your take on the story.

Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by AJ McCall on 23-Aug-2021

LOL. You're welcome! Yeah, I'm pretty sure the Breedline weren't, they'd be in a lot of trouble. And more action!!? You just made my day...