My Forever Hawk.
A contest entry12 total reviews
Comment from Bonnie Seach
The hawk played such a huge part in the Author's life. The knowledge of this great bird consoled her in her darkest hours.
SO much tragedy in one life. One wonders why? Answers will be found at jw.org. It is free and without obligation.
There is the hope of a resurrection back to life on earth in perfect conditions. John 5:28,29
Best wishes for the contest
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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The hawk played such a huge part in the Author's life. The knowledge of this great bird consoled her in her darkest hours.
SO much tragedy in one life. One wonders why? Answers will be found at jw.org. It is free and without obligation.
There is the hope of a resurrection back to life on earth in perfect conditions. John 5:28,29
Best wishes for the contest
Comment Written 18-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much Bonnie for reading, reviewing and your kind comments, suggestions and good wishes.
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🙏👌👏🤗😘
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Aww I loved all the symbols, they mean so much.
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Thank you. I like to use the little emojis. They say express so much without a lot of words ✨🤗
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That is so true.
Comment from Aiona
What a sweet story! I think there might be a typo in this line though. Or maybe not.
"Clayton was the gentleness man"
I'm sure if there's a "gentleness man" icon out there, but I wasn't aware of any. :)
Did you mean "gentlest"?
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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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What a sweet story! I think there might be a typo in this line though. Or maybe not.
"Clayton was the gentleness man"
I'm sure if there's a "gentleness man" icon out there, but I wasn't aware of any. :)
Did you mean "gentlest"?
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your great comments. Hey that will work, you have to remember I was only sixteen at the time, I will change this immediately. Again thanks.
