"The Book of Death"
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Comment from HarryT
A well-written thoughtful analysis of cradle to grave experience. Although there is not an establish rhyming pattern, the poem still works for me and I like the repeating line. Nothing seems forced and the poem flows nicely through life experience. It possesses the capacity to make the reader think. A very nice job.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2021
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A well-written thoughtful analysis of cradle to grave experience. Although there is not an establish rhyming pattern, the poem still works for me and I like the repeating line. Nothing seems forced and the poem flows nicely through life experience. It possesses the capacity to make the reader think. A very nice job.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2021
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I like to write in this style to keep people on edge and then bring them slowly into reality; yes as clarity?
Paints the picture!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Versch
I am really touched by your poem. It contains powerful emotions that are only so true that would even melt the hardest of hearts, and your author's note explaining the noble deeds your son Jason's organs have done to save other lives. God bless you.
Best wishes,
Versch
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2021
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I am really touched by your poem. It contains powerful emotions that are only so true that would even melt the hardest of hearts, and your author's note explaining the noble deeds your son Jason's organs have done to save other lives. God bless you.
Best wishes,
Versch
Comment Written 18-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2021
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When I started to write...
Yes, and not just write...
But write deeply, extremely, and after reviewing?
I then realized that I'm gifted.
Yes, and this is when I'm at my best.
Much appreciated wonderful review and sentiments.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Beejay
The emotion not only in your words but what those words reflect upon the reader are so strong, sensitive and powerful..they communicate so readily with me.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2021
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The emotion not only in your words but what those words reflect upon the reader are so strong, sensitive and powerful..they communicate so readily with me.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2021
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Wisdom is something that cannot be attained to repetition.
Any good writer like Gresham and right from their mind and amaze people.
A writer that loves thy work like Stephen King can write from the mind and the Heart.
But the write...
(From the Mind, Heart, and Soul?)
It's a curse inverse and a blessing in disguise.
Thanks for your time and review.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment from Prova1
Amazing! I don't think myself as an over emotional person but for some reason I got teary eyes. It's perfect, it truly made my day. I almost read it 4 times. Thanks to the author for writing this.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Amazing! I don't think myself as an over emotional person but for some reason I got teary eyes. It's perfect, it truly made my day. I almost read it 4 times. Thanks to the author for writing this.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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A parent's worst nightmare.
A husband's worst nightmare.
It's a lose your only son and your only wife in less than 8 months.
You either find religion extremely quick because nothing else will help.
But I did realize time and journaling or the greatest when it comes to my particular problem....
You not only honor me but also my Son Jason Richard above!
I thank you for being touched and that's the idea behind it!
Doctor Ricky 1024
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I'm sorry for your loss, I've been through similar circumstances and I can relate to how hard it is. Keep on writing, best wishes. May god bless your soul.
Comment from J.R. Michael
Nicely written poem. Great job pacing and working your way to the end of when Death now ends within. Not sure if it's a typo but the second line of the first stanza it just reads "within the "
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
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Nicely written poem. Great job pacing and working your way to the end of when Death now ends within. Not sure if it's a typo but the second line of the first stanza it just reads "within the "
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
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Thanks for the typo and review Michael.
Doctor Ricky 1024
