Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

I liked the sentiments of this little piece but I count your third line as six syllables, 'e-ven if it's fleet-ing'. This will disqualify it unless it is corrected which would be a shame. I would suggest you delete the 'it's' whis not essential. It will then be worth the stars I am awarding.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021

Thank you Gynt, I hope I caught it in time. Thank you for always finding time to read and review my work, it means the world to me.

Always
Justafan of yours
Missy

Comment from Jay Squires

Exceptional

Love is the mightiest of emotions, isn't it, soaring over all others, always within the reach of those who stretch beyond their own self-interest. Love always carries a plus-sign and always adds to whatever reaches for and grasps it. So much for stream of consciousness, Missy. You said it so much more cleanly in your 5-7-5. Good luck with it in the contest, my dear!

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021

I?m honored you chose this work to give a coveted 6.

Thank you very much, Jay. Your review is poetry in itself :)

Always
Justafan of yours
Missy

Comment from Patricia McPike

Excellent

This poem is a beautiful reminder to live lovingly. Especially for me as I am aging. It meets the requirements of a 5-7-5 poem nicely. An enjoyable poem to read.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021

Hello, Patricia :)
Thank you for this oh so kind review.
It?s a lovely way to meet someone new on FanStory. :)

Always
Justafan
Missy

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Great job with your contest entry. The syllable count is correct per line. I like the color scheme, the great image, and your true words. You give readers much to think about.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021

Thank you, Jan for the lovely review. It?s much appreciated :)

Always
Justafan of yours
Missy

Comment from Juanita J Martin

Good

I agree with the premise of this poem. Everything is precious. Especially life. It comes in moments, it goes in moments. Might as well enjoy those moments while we can, in love.
The poem is well-written and from the heart.

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 Comment Written 16-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021

Hello Juanita, first let me say thank you for reading and reviewing my work :)
Now, is there anything I could change to get a little better rating? If not then thank you again for stopping by.

Always
Justafan
Missy

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes some words of wisdom here expressed effectively in this short format of just seventeen syllables - life is indeed short and the experience of love is one of its precious moments

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 Comment Written 16-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021

Thank you very much for spending your valuable time this evening reading and leaving this lovely review.
Always
Justafan