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Comment from TammyRenee
Cute with a funny ending.
The one thing that stuck out to me was using the word "number." The use of "two" would be smother.
Great job, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Cute with a funny ending.
The one thing that stuck out to me was using the word "number." The use of "two" would be smother.
Great job, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Why thank you for your time review.
And yes, that little grammar correction idea?
Well, I'll take it in some consideration and re-review it myself.
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Comment from Dr. Nad
Lust-Fool Day! is a unique literary piece that shares the unique perspective of a man who was captivated by the spell of a woman. The day seems to have started with the feeling that it was going to be one of those days. I guess he thought he had no choice in the matter. Embrace the Love from Above.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Lust-Fool Day! is a unique literary piece that shares the unique perspective of a man who was captivated by the spell of a woman. The day seems to have started with the feeling that it was going to be one of those days. I guess he thought he had no choice in the matter. Embrace the Love from Above.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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The thoughts and idea?
Firstly, came from a combination of the dating situation today.
Yes, on the internet combined with April Fool's Day!
Thanks Doc And!
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Ricky, You are most welcome. I apologize for being late to respond. I have been out of state and out of FanStory for the past two weeks.
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No worry Dr. Nad.
Us doctors are always busy with prescriptions and appointments!!?
LOL!
Doctor Ricky 1024
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No worry Dr. Nad.
Us doctors are always busy with prescriptions and appointments!!?
LOL!
Doctor Ricky 1024
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No worry Dr. Nad.
Us doctors are always busy with prescriptions and appointments!!?
LOL!
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Blessings
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Blessings
Comment from NABattaglia
Are there any petitions to change Friday the 13th to Lust Fool Day? If not, this poem should be attached as an exhibit why. Great work with a fun twist for this one. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Are there any petitions to change Friday the 13th to Lust Fool Day? If not, this poem should be attached as an exhibit why. Great work with a fun twist for this one. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Perhaps I should post it on Facebook and go for a larger audience and likes?
Thanks for your time and review.
And I love your advice!
Doctor Ricky 1024
