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Endangered Animals

Tears flow cause list just grows.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Karen Estep
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I enjoyed this 5-7-5 poem and felt that it was informative, and innovative. The graphic was amazing, and certainly added a great visual for your story! Good luck in this contest, my friend. Keep on writing!

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2021

reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
    The list of endangered species just keeps on getting longer ..

    To think some of these beautiful animals in the artwork you praise, risk to be instinct in 10/15 years makes me sad but also angry.

    Thank you for reviewing my protest poem.
Comment from dragonpoet
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This is a nicely written and illustrate 5-7-5 for the contest. I like the internal rhyme and the message. We should all worry about the way we are overusing and ruining nature.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2021

reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
    Sad that Man chooses to kill these animals for money.

    Some of these animals in the poster risk to be instinct in a decade

    There are those that have dedicated their lives to try and save them but they are in the minority.

    I shudder at the world we are leaving generations to come ..

    Thank you for the positive review!
reply by dragonpoet on 10-Aug-2021
    You're welcome. It is sad that we are close to losing so many animals.
    joan
Comment from 8upchef
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Much said in a short form poem. Part of why I love Haiku is that you have to be very blunt if there is a point to be made. I hope those who read this are doers. Well done.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2021

reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
    I checked your portfolio because your username is new to me.

    I see you like the shorter format too. I found it challenging..

    I started writing only three years ago so I m not a poet ..actually words have never been my thing .. I m a listener.

    I was told that a true haiku should not have need of artwork ..

    I see you want your words alone to create an imagine in readers mind.

    I love beautiful pictures ,so I combined the two .. I m glad in this poetry site it s allowed, I would not have subscribed otherwise.

    Thank you for the positive feedback ..

    In my small , I help often my friend who picks up stray cats ; I give a hand bottle feeding sickly kittens so they may have a second chance.

    Keep safe!