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Friends

A poem dedicated to true friends

5 total reviews 
Comment from Janetsue
Exceptional
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I enjoyed reading this very much, Darren. It holds great truth and I did smile at the image of friends being forever faithful and caring. You have posted a very uplifting poem. :-) Janet

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021
    Thanks so much Janet, so nice to hear from you again. How have you been? I've been up and down, I'm on my way back up again thanks to revealing reviews like yours!

    Thank you so much for taking the time to review this~

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger Cull

    Darren
Comment from irishauthorme
Exceptional
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A look at yourself, an inward view, so often more revealing than the casual glance while washing, combing, shaving.
Often the enemy is us, countered by the person we pretend to be, avoiding that direct look into the :"Mirror, Mirror, on the wall..."
Every day there is a different person smiling back at us, "Who are you today?"
And who is that person deceiving?
"Are you the Deceiver?"
(Smile) "No, I am your comforter."
"What words do you have for me?"
(Smile) "Let's go have some fun!"
"But what about the...?"
(Smile) "That will all take care of itself. Don't worry."
"Get thee behind me, Satan!"
(Frown)"Well, if you're going to be like that!"
(New Image) "Who are you?"
(Stern face)"It's me, dummy!"
(You Smile) "OK, I recognize you now!"
irish

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
    Dear Irish, if I took all of your reviews they would weave the fabric of life. You are uncanny ability to reveal to me what I'm really writing about never fails to amaze me. I remember one time when I was a teenager you told me go look in the mirror for 10 minutes no, 20 minutes no 30, minutes and as each increment got higher, I got more nervous cuz I was kind of a phony. You helped to reveal me to myself in ways that only God could orchestrate therefore I know your connection to God is real and that you are headed for the pearly Gates. I wonder if I'll know you after I pass away? Do you think I will? That remains to be seen. As you know I have strong ties and believe in all the religions but yet I believe more in spirituality. I believe in the Eastern religions to a certain extent and have ties to the Catholic Mormon seventh-day Adventist etc so it is my prayer that as you reveal myself to me then I will be receptive of what you are really trying to communicate.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger

    Darren
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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This poem is presented from a good perspective to draw the reader in. You play with word sounds is clever. Once again I marvel at your ability to orchestrate such art and to give it substance.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
    Thank you so much for your kind words, your review is very appreciated
    Thanks for your continued support here.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger

    Darren
reply by Liz O'Neill on 07-Aug-2021
    ***smile***
Comment from lyenochka
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Hi Darren! Thanks for your words of wisdom. Yes, friends will always "bend" and adapt with us to encourage and be like us. But enemies force some retrospection and challenge us to grow in character by showing grace.

ammend and (amend)

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
    Thank you for your wonderful review and for correcting my amendment (~!~)

    Blessings,
    Brother Badger
    Darren
Comment from robyn corum
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Darren,

What a fun post. This reads as a cautionary tale and sounds like you know exactly what you're talking about. --wink-- I hope you are doing well - haven't seen you lately. Take good care of yourself!

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
    Thank you so much Robyn for your encouraging review. It is very appreciated!
    And yes, I am doing well thank you.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger

    Darren