Looking for Demons
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "The Contract"An Investigator needs to find a demon
4 total reviews
Comment from Adri7enne
Always fun to start something new, uh? No limitations imposed on you by something you wrote previously. A God, creating a new world. That's what writers are. I think I might enjoy this. I often accept that we live in a conscious Universe and everything responds to the vibes I send out. There are days I feel I create my world on a daily basis. And then there are periods where I feel totally helpless, like a piece of driftwood caught in a swirling river current. But your world is going to be chaotic if you have to sacrifice to every 'supposed' god. Pretty exhausting. Fun idea, Bob. Interesting mind. I enjoy peeking inside whatever might be happening on any given day. Good reading!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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Always fun to start something new, uh? No limitations imposed on you by something you wrote previously. A God, creating a new world. That's what writers are. I think I might enjoy this. I often accept that we live in a conscious Universe and everything responds to the vibes I send out. There are days I feel I create my world on a daily basis. And then there are periods where I feel totally helpless, like a piece of driftwood caught in a swirling river current. But your world is going to be chaotic if you have to sacrifice to every 'supposed' god. Pretty exhausting. Fun idea, Bob. Interesting mind. I enjoy peeking inside whatever might be happening on any given day. Good reading!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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Thanks. I just got this idea and had to get it out of my head as soon as I could.
Comment from Jay Squires
I love the way you write. You develop your characters well. Each is distinctive (except for Frank: you were a little slim on Frank).
He must have done. [He must have done ?THAT?]
You say it's going to be a long short story ... but please tell me you haven't ended it.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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I love the way you write. You develop your characters well. Each is distinctive (except for Frank: you were a little slim on Frank).
He must have done. [He must have done ?THAT?]
You say it's going to be a long short story ... but please tell me you haven't ended it.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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No, I haven't ended it, but I don't think there's more than one or two more chapters in it. Thanks for your teview. This one was a little off the wall so I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Delightful--wickedly witty and wry! You nailed it.
Showered and dressed [COMMA] he made his way to the kitchen, dropped a capsule into the coffee machine and switched it on.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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Delightful--wickedly witty and wry! You nailed it.
Showered and dressed [COMMA] he made his way to the kitchen, dropped a capsule into the coffee machine and switched it on.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Terry Overton
I am all in on this one! Your writing style is my favorite kind of writing. Wait... are you using a pen name and you are really John Grisham? I want to read all of this. Fantastic writing. In case I didn't tell you, fantastic writing. But seriously, the fast paced suspense and the ongoing curiosity I have as a reader is the money shot. Kudos!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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I am all in on this one! Your writing style is my favorite kind of writing. Wait... are you using a pen name and you are really John Grisham? I want to read all of this. Fantastic writing. In case I didn't tell you, fantastic writing. But seriously, the fast paced suspense and the ongoing curiosity I have as a reader is the money shot. Kudos!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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LOL, thank you for your effusive review. No, Snodlander is my real name, I'm afraid.
