My Own Little Corner
(Just me, my typewriter and I)27 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
You did a wonderful job with this. I can see why you won the muse contest. Every word and phrase is well chosen and, each rhyme works as well. This is excellent in every way and, I cannot think of anything I would change with this one. I like to wake up early and write on my laptop computer. I write best in the wee early hours of the morning. I have my favorite place at my desk, which is in my bedroom. I am sitting there right now.
Thank you, Mimi, for contributing to the Fan Story collective this marvelous poem.
Have a good upcoming week,
Jesse
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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You did a wonderful job with this. I can see why you won the muse contest. Every word and phrase is well chosen and, each rhyme works as well. This is excellent in every way and, I cannot think of anything I would change with this one. I like to wake up early and write on my laptop computer. I write best in the wee early hours of the morning. I have my favorite place at my desk, which is in my bedroom. I am sitting there right now.
Thank you, Mimi, for contributing to the Fan Story collective this marvelous poem.
Have a good upcoming week,
Jesse
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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Hi, Jesse! Thank you so much for the beautiful words of review. They are greatly appreciated and I'm so happy that you enjoyed My Own Little Corner. It's so nice to have your very own special place! Thank you again and you, two have a wonderful week!
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Yes, it is great to have a space to call your own, where you can write freely and just be yourself. I am glad we have ours.
Take care and be safe,
Jesse
Comment from NABattaglia
Great poem. Structurally flows well and the words chosen fit their purpose. Each line is unique and well-crafted, fitting in the the overall scheme of the poem. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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Great poem. Structurally flows well and the words chosen fit their purpose. Each line is unique and well-crafted, fitting in the the overall scheme of the poem. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review My Own Little Corner. I'm so glad that you enjoyed and that you felt it was unique and well-crafted. I did have a fun time writing this one! Thank you again and have a wonderful week!
Comment from lyenochka
I just love that picture! And your words are perfectly chosen to keep with an even meter and pleasant rhyming throughout the writing process, including that moment of thrill and exultation of having written it exactly as you wanted to do! Congratulation on the win!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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I just love that picture! And your words are perfectly chosen to keep with an even meter and pleasant rhyming throughout the writing process, including that moment of thrill and exultation of having written it exactly as you wanted to do! Congratulation on the win!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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Thank you so very much for this lovely review! I had fun writing it and am so pleased you enjoyed. Thank you again for the wonderful review! Enjoy your weekend!
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It was very well done! I don't have time to read all those contest entries but it was good to read yours even after the contest!
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Thank you again for the lovely words! Have a wonderful evening!
Comment from playinaround
So well written. I like how it intensifies in the end to show real talent with words. I really enjoyed this poem and I can see why you won the contest. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021
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So well written. I like how it intensifies in the end to show real talent with words. I really enjoyed this poem and I can see why you won the contest. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for the lovely review of My Own Little Corner. It was so fun to write and am so happy that you enjoyed the intensification I was try to achieve. Thank you again and have a beautiful day!
Comment from Terry Overton
This is outstanding! I liked everything about it. The rhyming and the rhythm are terrific. The picture you selected was perfect for the poem and I could see the "writer" pecking away! Great work!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021
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This is outstanding! I liked everything about it. The rhyming and the rhythm are terrific. The picture you selected was perfect for the poem and I could see the "writer" pecking away! Great work!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021
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Thank you so very much, Terry, for this absolutely lovely review! I'm so happy you enjoyed My Own Little Corner and that you thought the picture was perfect for the piece! Thank you again and have a wonderful lday!
Comment from estory
This poem is a celebration of creativity and poetry, and you had a nice upbeat rhythm in the short meter and rhyme scheme that just tripped along. It reminded me of a Keats favorite, There Was A Naughty Boy... and a naughty boy was he, for nothing would he do, but scribble poetry....estory
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2021
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This poem is a celebration of creativity and poetry, and you had a nice upbeat rhythm in the short meter and rhyme scheme that just tripped along. It reminded me of a Keats favorite, There Was A Naughty Boy... and a naughty boy was he, for nothing would he do, but scribble poetry....estory
Comment Written 12-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2021
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What a lovely review and so greatly appreciated. It was a joy to write and to try and find just the right words to build to the finale. I am so happy you enjoyed. Thank you again and have a wonderful evening!
Comment from Paul McFarland
Outstanding effort that goes with the picture very well. I love the rhyme scheme and meter, and you have finished the poem off in a very clever fashion.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2021
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Outstanding effort that goes with the picture very well. I love the rhyme scheme and meter, and you have finished the poem off in a very clever fashion.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2021
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Thank you so very much, Paul, for the great review! I'm so happy you enjoyed (especially the ending)... Thank you again and have a wonderful evening!
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent combination of of rhyme, rhythm and narrative, all important when writing something like a hymn or ballady song, I love the process of this, my favourite style of poem. Well done. Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2021
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This is an excellent combination of of rhyme, rhythm and narrative, all important when writing something like a hymn or ballady song, I love the process of this, my favourite style of poem. Well done. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2021
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Thank you so very much, Roy, for this wonderful review! I'm so happy you enjoyed My Own Little Corner and that it was favourite style of poetry writing! Thank you again and have a wonderful evening!
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Well done
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
A beautifully structured poem with well-chosen words for impact. I'm not at all surprised that this won the content hand down. A lovely poem with great rhyme and meter. Congratulations on the contest win -- it's well deserved. Much enjoyed. I will also try to find a quiet corner for writing!:)
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2021
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A beautifully structured poem with well-chosen words for impact. I'm not at all surprised that this won the content hand down. A lovely poem with great rhyme and meter. Congratulations on the contest win -- it's well deserved. Much enjoyed. I will also try to find a quiet corner for writing!:)
Comment Written 11-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2021
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful review of My Own Little Corner! So much fun to write and I'm so happy that you enjoyed! Thank you again and have a grand day!
Comment from Gracie619
Thank you very much for sharing this moving piece of writing. When I came across it, it was just the thing that I needed in my day. I found myself reading it more than twice and stopping to put myself in my own happy place. You have such a gift!
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much for sharing this moving piece of writing. When I came across it, it was just the thing that I needed in my day. I found myself reading it more than twice and stopping to put myself in my own happy place. You have such a gift!
Comment Written 10-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for those lovely words! I'm so happy that My Own Little Corner brightened your day and helped you find your own happy place! Thank you again and have a beautiful evening!
