Heart Crafted Poems -2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Thoughts on Love through Nature"Musings of an old man -2021
44 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful poem indeed - your thoughts and reveries are such that we are with you, observing as you are observing, thinking as you think, appreciating along with you, the beauty of creation. The realization of what love is, and its eternal nature, moves it to a new spiritual level.
In terms of practical components, the alliteration works well here, sufficient, varied, and not over-used - a subtle enhancement. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2021
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A beautiful poem indeed - your thoughts and reveries are such that we are with you, observing as you are observing, thinking as you think, appreciating along with you, the beauty of creation. The realization of what love is, and its eternal nature, moves it to a new spiritual level.
In terms of practical components, the alliteration works well here, sufficient, varied, and not over-used - a subtle enhancement. Well done.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2021
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Thanks Wendy
Comment from Boogienights
This is a beautiful poem about the writers connection of experiences and the natural world. This descriptive narrative is what memories are made of, I love your recollections. Best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2021
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This is a beautiful poem about the writers connection of experiences and the natural world. This descriptive narrative is what memories are made of, I love your recollections. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 09-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Eunice Amero
You moved my heart and I felt I was there. There nothing in this whole wide world that can take the place of the taste of love. When you love and get it back you can be so happy. Take it away and you miss it beyond words. I am happy you shared such a nice poem and the feeling I got from it. Good luck and keep writing. I find when a man writes a poem it comes from the heart because they aren't ones who express very well. Thanks again.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
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You moved my heart and I felt I was there. There nothing in this whole wide world that can take the place of the taste of love. When you love and get it back you can be so happy. Take it away and you miss it beyond words. I am happy you shared such a nice poem and the feeling I got from it. Good luck and keep writing. I find when a man writes a poem it comes from the heart because they aren't ones who express very well. Thanks again.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
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Eunice, w0w! Thanks for such a nice validation of my free verse poem. I am very grateful for your kind words.
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you arew more than welcome
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Our Creator has made so much beauty for us to enjoy. We just need to take time to enjoy all of it. Your well written contest entry described the beautify very well. I enjoyed reading. Thank you and good luck.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
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Our Creator has made so much beauty for us to enjoy. We just need to take time to enjoy all of it. Your well written contest entry described the beautify very well. I enjoyed reading. Thank you and good luck.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much Barbara Wilkey! I value your review and comments.
Comment from Bonnie Seach
This poem follows the contest requirements
It is well crafted and structured by skilfully choice of words
It is attractively presented with color and color
The Creator made a perfect home, a Paradise for humans. Humans have ruined it. Soon God will restore everything and humans to perfection here on earth. It is his purpose. The author intuitively acclaims this, by love of nature.
The Bible endorses this thought at Romans 1:19,20; 1John 4:19
Thete are amazing articles on Creation and nature @www.jw.org. Everything on this website is free and without obligation.
Best wishes for the contest
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
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This poem follows the contest requirements
It is well crafted and structured by skilfully choice of words
It is attractively presented with color and color
The Creator made a perfect home, a Paradise for humans. Humans have ruined it. Soon God will restore everything and humans to perfection here on earth. It is his purpose. The author intuitively acclaims this, by love of nature.
The Bible endorses this thought at Romans 1:19,20; 1John 4:19
Thete are amazing articles on Creation and nature @www.jw.org. Everything on this website is free and without obligation.
Best wishes for the contest
Comment Written 09-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
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Bonnie, as a lover of God's plan and the gift of nature for each of us to experience His Presence, I thank you! I appreciate the web insight also. 🙏🙏🙏
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JLR. Tank you for your response. I do apologize for the text errors in my review. I am relieved that you were able to decipher😅You may download all or anything from jw.org for free. Please make full use of it. Someone like yourself, who is a spiritual person. Will find an abundance of good things there. Please share with your loved ones. 👌👏👆👍🏻🌹🤗
Comment from James Milici1
JLR - I like the way the poem transitions from pure description, with lots of poetic imagery, to the personal feelings that the scene engenders, finally and inevitable evolving into the most important of feelings: pure unadulterated love. Thanks for the sentiments and great depiction of natural wonders.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
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JLR - I like the way the poem transitions from pure description, with lots of poetic imagery, to the personal feelings that the scene engenders, finally and inevitable evolving into the most important of feelings: pure unadulterated love. Thanks for the sentiments and great depiction of natural wonders.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
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James Milici1, Thank you for the review and wonderful comments.
Comment from Beejay
Such a beautiful entry for e Free Verse completion. I read through it several times, not because I needed to but because I wanted to. I was lost in your exquisite descriptiveness and flow of words.good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
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Such a beautiful entry for e Free Verse completion. I read through it several times, not because I needed to but because I wanted to. I was lost in your exquisite descriptiveness and flow of words.good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
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Beejay, what a wonderful compliment you bestowed to me by actually reading this free verse poem more than once ...for me, as a free verse poet, that is the best I could ever hope to accomplish with my work. 🙏😊
Comment from Paul McFarland
I am there, seeing and feeling all he poet is writing about. He lulls me into a trance, then surprises me by telling me he is experiencing this through aged eyes - very effective.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
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I am there, seeing and feeling all he poet is writing about. He lulls me into a trance, then surprises me by telling me he is experiencing this through aged eyes - very effective.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
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Paul, thank for the your review and comments.
Comment from equestrik
To me this write speaks of the gaining of wisdom and the thought processes we use in order to continue in art of making sense of the world. It is lovely.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
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To me this write speaks of the gaining of wisdom and the thought processes we use in order to continue in art of making sense of the world. It is lovely.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
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Equestrik, thanks so much for your review and comments.
Comment from Gracie619
Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of work. I've been away from reading and writing for a bit - life has a way of taking over sometimes, you know. But this piece just drew me in with the message that it conveys. I am so glad you posted this. You have such a gift! Take care.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of work. I've been away from reading and writing for a bit - life has a way of taking over sometimes, you know. But this piece just drew me in with the message that it conveys. I am so glad you posted this. You have such a gift! Take care.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
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Gracie619, it pleases me that my poem was one among the many you read and find pleasure in, for I too have been writing very little as life has kept me away from my pen. Be well! 🙏🙏🙏
