Supermoon Gazes
5/6/5 Contemporary Spring Haiku14 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
An exceptional work of poetry. It's beautifully written. It has a good poetry structure. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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An exceptional work of poetry. It's beautifully written. It has a good poetry structure. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Thank you
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You're welcome!
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy--and the picture could grace the cover of a science-fiction novel; that's immediately what sprang to mind--of course, when it comes to my mind, ANYTHING that springs is a wonder to behold!
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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Another fine poem, Gypsy--and the picture could grace the cover of a science-fiction novel; that's immediately what sprang to mind--of course, when it comes to my mind, ANYTHING that springs is a wonder to behold!
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Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from JOSHUA LANE
Great writing. I instantly got Colorado Red Rock vibes from reading this. Fine way of personifying the cliffs and hos they "blush." Well done! Keep writing fire like this.
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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Great writing. I instantly got Colorado Red Rock vibes from reading this. Fine way of personifying the cliffs and hos they "blush." Well done! Keep writing fire like this.
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Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Anne Johnston
This is well worth six stars, what a great use of words: "super moon gazes,
shy desert cliffs blush." You are gifted in putting words together to create these Haiku verses.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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This is well worth six stars, what a great use of words: "super moon gazes,
shy desert cliffs blush." You are gifted in putting words together to create these Haiku verses.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review, six stars, and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You are welcome
