Supermoon Gazes
5/6/5 Contemporary Spring Haiku14 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Sweet. The anthropomorphism of the desert cliffs is charmingly endearing. So many nature scenes are gifted to us! Eyes up and out of our phones. Embrace the real world and leave the virtual one behind!
Karenina
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Sweet. The anthropomorphism of the desert cliffs is charmingly endearing. So many nature scenes are gifted to us! Eyes up and out of our phones. Embrace the real world and leave the virtual one behind!
Karenina
Comment Written 05-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Thank you for digging my old poems. God bless you and your family.
Love,
Marival
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It was a delightful
gift of an afternoon
I gave myself!
Hugs!
Comment from royowen
There's been a lot of different moons, blood moons, usually the time of the feast of tabernacles, and Passover, which have some end times prophesy attached to them. Beautifully written Haiku Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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There's been a lot of different moons, blood moons, usually the time of the feast of tabernacles, and Passover, which have some end times prophesy attached to them. Beautifully written Haiku Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Roy.
Gypsy hugs and blessings
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Well done
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An ambient scene as the pink colours mix together here and your well chosen words have painted nature at its best, much enjoyed, a fine Haiku, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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An ambient scene as the pink colours mix together here and your well chosen words have painted nature at its best, much enjoyed, a fine Haiku, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs and blessings
Comment from Gloria ....
This is just stunning, Gypsy. Surreal artwork that causes the desert cliffs to blush because the super moon is staring a wee mite too hard.
Enjoyed this very much today. Thank you for sharing. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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This is just stunning, Gypsy. Surreal artwork that causes the desert cliffs to blush because the super moon is staring a wee mite too hard.
Enjoyed this very much today. Thank you for sharing. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 03-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Gloria.
Gypsy hugs and blessings
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a tantilizing contemporary haiku. I like the way you use existing meteorological terms or geographical names to build up your image.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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This is a tantilizing contemporary haiku. I like the way you use existing meteorological terms or geographical names to build up your image.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, my friend. I appreciate your time and understanding.
Gypsy hugs and blessings
Comment from nomi338
How clever to ascribe human personalities to celestial and natural rock formations here on the earth. Most of us realize that the Earth, in fact most if not all of creations is alive in some way, so giving them human personalities is not totally crazy.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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How clever to ascribe human personalities to celestial and natural rock formations here on the earth. Most of us realize that the Earth, in fact most if not all of creations is alive in some way, so giving them human personalities is not totally crazy.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like your personified the moon and rock. After being gazed by the super moon, the red rock blushed. It is so cute. I also like your matching color of the three lines with the color of the art..
Beautiful overall.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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I like your personified the moon and rock. After being gazed by the super moon, the red rock blushed. It is so cute. I also like your matching color of the three lines with the color of the art..
Beautiful overall.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much, Lisa. I appreciate your time, the six stars, and exceptional review.
Gyp
Comment from lyenochka
So cool! I couldn't see the picture on my phone but using hubby's laptop, I can see how well your picture fits your poem. Yes, that supermoon's gaze is causing those desert cliffs to blush!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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So cool! I couldn't see the picture on my phone but using hubby's laptop, I can see how well your picture fits your poem. Yes, that supermoon's gaze is causing those desert cliffs to blush!
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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What are you doing reviewing, young lady? LoL thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem, Helen.
Gypsy hugs and blessings
Comment from oliver818
This is a great little poem, I enjoyed reading it. It has a great feel to it and I love the imagery you use , it's so evocative and well chosen. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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This is a great little poem, I enjoyed reading it. It has a great feel to it and I love the imagery you use , it's so evocative and well chosen. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and very well written contemporary spring haiku. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and very well written contemporary spring haiku. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much, Teri.
Gypsy hugs and blessings
