Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A lovely pocket-sized message to carry around! Patricia, your words flow smoothly and your sentiments as ever inspired by your strong faith carry such optimism and hope. Thanks for sharing. Debbie

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023

Thank you Debbie for taking time to review my work.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

This is a beautifully penned poem for our promises are yes and amen in Christ. Happy birthday to you too, dear Patricia! I know it's coming up soon. I wanted to wish you a happy birthday before my week got away from me. Blessings to you too.
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023

Thank you Sally for your kind review. I do appreciate it very much.

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

This is a powerful message. One needs to trust in God as your guide in your life's journey.
Beautiful words to give particularly if one is in despair.
Regards
Mary

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021

Thanks for your review.

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

A very positive message in your spiritual poem about putting your trust in God to lead your way through life. Your strong faith comes through with this one patricia.
Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021

Thanks for your nice review.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

Your deeply spiritual poem sends a powerful message about God and His children's futures. The problem is that some people decide all on their own, without even praying, what THEY want the future to be. Then they presume that's what He wants for them.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021

Thank you for your kind review.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This is very nicely done Pat. I enjoyed reading it and I've missed seeing you put much on lately. You're probably working on publishing something. We all have a destiny and where it lies is our choice. I pray we choose wisely.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021

Thank you for your kind review.

Comment from Edward Escobar

Excellent

I totally agree with your words of spirituality. Faith is allowing the will of our Lord to work miracles in our daily lives. Love is His name and I want to remain under his protective umbrella forever. Thank you for sharing such an inspiring message of faith and hope.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021

Thank you for your kind review.

Comment from siais

Excellent

That destiny will come true

Every word is true and the greatness of the almighty is amazing and destiny is in his hands, thanks for sharing, best wishes, take care!!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021

Thank you for your kind review.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Patricia,

Yay! I've been wondering about you. So glad to see you posting. I may have just been missing your posts - like ships passing in the night - but I was hoping to see you here and read more.

Congrats on your book - I just saw that! HUZZAH!

Good luck!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021

Thank you for your kind review. I am having extreme difficulties with my writing because my vision is failing.

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

I am always glad to hear "The Message". The poem goes great with the picture. One thing I think you should do is work on the meter, so that it reads a little smoother.

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 Comment Written 02-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021

Thank you for your kind review.