THE CURSE
Viewing comments for Chapter 76 "The Stranger/Part 3 "The six book of the Novels of the Breedline
5 total reviews
Comment from justafan
Hmmmm, interesting chapter here. Now, to move to the dark figure. I'm excited and anxious to know what comes next.
Well written my dear friend. This is my favorite genre to read. I find some online but not as good as this. I need to get the Breedline series.
Exceptional.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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Hmmmm, interesting chapter here. Now, to move to the dark figure. I'm excited and anxious to know what comes next.
Well written my dear friend. This is my favorite genre to read. I find some online but not as good as this. I need to get the Breedline series.
Exceptional.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment Written 03-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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Thank you, MIssy :)
I appreciate the awesome review and generous stars. This one was fun to write. I like dipping into my alter-ego. LOL!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment from royowen
I love the way, even though your heroes are "supermen" they behave like good friends, shiacking each other, which gives that precious human touch. But they are being confronted by a presence that looks a little unholy in its pale presence, but they have a faith in God, and therefore something unholy facing them. Excellent post Shana, you've got it all my friend, a good writer with faith. Well done, blessings Roy
Typo: Not so close this time (kapessh) kapeesh?
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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I love the way, even though your heroes are "supermen" they behave like good friends, shiacking each other, which gives that precious human touch. But they are being confronted by a presence that looks a little unholy in its pale presence, but they have a faith in God, and therefore something unholy facing them. Excellent post Shana, you've got it all my friend, a good writer with faith. Well done, blessings Roy
Typo: Not so close this time (kapessh) kapeesh?
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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Thank you, Roy :)
This was so much fun to write. I love the banter between characters. It's a nice change of pace. And thanks for catching the typo. Good eyes you have.
Thanks for all your support and kind words. It means a lot to me.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
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Beautifully done Shana
Comment from siais
The dark figure just stood there. It was hard to tell, but it looked to be a man.
This was the part which gave me shrill , well nice one and may be I need to read the next chapter.Thanks for sharing, best wishes.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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The dark figure just stood there. It was hard to tell, but it looked to be a man.
This was the part which gave me shrill , well nice one and may be I need to read the next chapter.Thanks for sharing, best wishes.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Thank you, siais :)
So glad you enjoyed the chapter. It was definitely fun to write. I appreciate your positive feedback. Hope to hear from you again.
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment from Paul McFarland
You have "ducted for cover". It should be "ducked for cover". Also, I believe that bats are blind and have no eyes. It looks like you have a very interesting story line going.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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You have "ducted for cover". It should be "ducked for cover". Also, I believe that bats are blind and have no eyes. It looks like you have a very interesting story line going.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Thanks Paul :)
I appreciate the positive feedback and the typo you found. It's so easy to overlook the small things.
Thanks again,
Shana :)
Comment from AJ McCall
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!
It was getting good! And funny.
This chapter has to be the funniest so far, especially the part with the detective. And when you described Jace mimicking a vampire, I thought about the Hotel Transilvaina movie where Dracula hated it when people mocked him by saying, bleh, bleh, bleh. LOL.
And I know who they saw - Lenny. I'm wondering if they'll engage in a bloody fight or talk civially. I don't know if either will happen next week.
I did spot a typo, it's actually a funny one: "I hope one of those flying rats swoop down and bits you square on the--
Correction: bites.
I guess I'll see you next week, Shana. GOD, I hate WAITING! (LOL) SIX STARS!
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!
It was getting good! And funny.
This chapter has to be the funniest so far, especially the part with the detective. And when you described Jace mimicking a vampire, I thought about the Hotel Transilvaina movie where Dracula hated it when people mocked him by saying, bleh, bleh, bleh. LOL.
And I know who they saw - Lenny. I'm wondering if they'll engage in a bloody fight or talk civially. I don't know if either will happen next week.
I did spot a typo, it's actually a funny one: "I hope one of those flying rats swoop down and bits you square on the--
Correction: bites.
I guess I'll see you next week, Shana. GOD, I hate WAITING! (LOL) SIX STARS!
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Oh, thanks so much, AJ :)
I'm thrilled you found humor in this one. That's exactly what I was hoping for, along with the suspense at the end. I have adding a little comedy in the stories. And Jace loves to poke fun at others every chance he gets.
Next week will be the reveal of the stranger the Breedline come encounter with.
And thanks for catching my typo. Geez... I can't believe I didn't see that. Lol!
Hugs,
Shana :)
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LOL. It's totally fine. We all look over some stuff, including someone's feelings. (I'm looking at you, Jace.) You're welcome!!
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I forgot to mention, I thought the word 'ducted' was interesting. Did you mean ducked? Or am I reading it wrong...?
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I changed it to ducked. Haha! Thanks for catching that one too.
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:) You're welcome! LOL. I kept wondering why it said 'ducted'.
