Faith in God and Self!
Faith in God and Self is One's Anchor!47 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation, RP.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-A well written poem with
a very good message and
image with the laurels as
a symbol of winning
as long as you have faith.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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-Very nice image
and presentation, RP.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-A well written poem with
a very good message and
image with the laurels as
a symbol of winning
as long as you have faith.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Hello Pam,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting words backed by Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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You are very welcome, RP.
Comment from Senyai
Hi RPSaxena,
Your beautiful inspiring and uplifting poem is indeed beautifully written. These 4 line poems may look easy to accomplish at first, but not so. I found them quite difficult! But your verse is a gem.
Your notes are a great accompaniment for your poem as well as the image chosen.
All the best in the contest:-)
Senyai
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Hi RPSaxena,
Your beautiful inspiring and uplifting poem is indeed beautifully written. These 4 line poems may look easy to accomplish at first, but not so. I found them quite difficult! But your verse is a gem.
Your notes are a great accompaniment for your poem as well as the image chosen.
All the best in the contest:-)
Senyai
Comment Written 01-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Hello Senyal,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting words backed by Veiled Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Faith carries people through the toughest trials, and especially in todays times when everything seems to be going wrong with our world. That God is in us, walking beside us, carrying us, all this keeps us strong and able to carry on. This is a lovely four-line poem, RP, and good luck in the contest! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Faith carries people through the toughest trials, and especially in todays times when everything seems to be going wrong with our world. That God is in us, walking beside us, carrying us, all this keeps us strong and able to carry on. This is a lovely four-line poem, RP, and good luck in the contest! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 01-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Hello Sandra,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting words backed by Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Absolutely. Accept it or not, everybody has Faith in God in one way or the other while the few never want to admit to the fact. I enjoyed your short poem. Good luck!
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Absolutely. Accept it or not, everybody has Faith in God in one way or the other while the few never want to admit to the fact. I enjoyed your short poem. Good luck!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Hello Seshadri Sreenivasan,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting words backed by Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Faith in God and Self", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work is a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with contest. Please let me know how you get on?
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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"Faith in God and Self", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work is a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 01-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Hello Duchess,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting words backed by Good Luck with the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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~RP, You're more than welcome.
God bless and take care,
the Duchess
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Really well done 4 line poem. All rules appear to be followed and the poem flows smoothly for this form.
Like your opening line and the use of exclamation points.
Best wishes for the contest!
Katiemae Dead
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Really well done 4 line poem. All rules appear to be followed and the poem flows smoothly for this form.
Like your opening line and the use of exclamation points.
Best wishes for the contest!
Katiemae Dead
Comment Written 01-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Hello KMD,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting words backed by Best Wishes for the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Right to the point. Sugg: use title spaces to max advantage rather than repeat lines of poem and each other--very important in a short poem to flesh ouot imagery. First-rate is an adjective usually used before the noun (laurels). Not sure if it works preceded by "laurels of the"
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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Right to the point. Sugg: use title spaces to max advantage rather than repeat lines of poem and each other--very important in a short poem to flesh ouot imagery. First-rate is an adjective usually used before the noun (laurels). Not sure if it works preceded by "laurels of the"
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Hello Elizabeth Emerald,
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
With best wishes,
~ RP
