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Faith in God and Self!

Faith in God and Self is One's Anchor!

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Comment from nomi338
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It takes faith to approach God in the first place. In order to be heard, we must first believe that he actually exists. After that we must be convinced that based on the history of all the times he has delivered men from their troubles, having the fait that he will hear and answer our prayers should be easy.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    Hello Nomi338,
    Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting words.
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A faithful write filled with positive vibes and belief here and I enjoyed your fine four liner for the contest. We all need that support at some time in our lives, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    Hello Dolly,
    Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting words backed by Veiled Good Luck in the contest.
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Faith in God and Self!
by RPSaxen

FAITH! 1
In God and oneself 5
Is the greatest help 5
For winning laurels of the FIRST-RATE!! 9

Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice spiritual entry for the Four Line Poem contest

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    Hello Gypsy Blue Rose,
    Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting words backed by Veiled Good Luck in the contest.
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP
Comment from Sharon Davis
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This four line poem highlights a spiritual theme and tone that emphasizes the strength of the writer's faith.

Well composed and presented.

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    Hello Sharon Davis,
    Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting words.
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP
Comment from Sherry Asbury
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I needed to read this today...trying to boost my self-esteem. In four lines you have presented wisdom that anyone can cling to...I love the image...it makes me think of Jesus walking on water after he left the boat. Very good work here!

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    Hello Sherry Asbury,
    Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting words backed by Veiled Good Luck in the contest.
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I think faith is God is most important and if you have faith in God then you can have faith in yourself. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you the best of luck.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    Hello Barbara.Wilkey,
    Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting words backed by Best of Luck in the contest.
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Rhaguvir, to have a religious faith is important to most, I suppose, but to have faith in yourself is equally important. Without it we would be nothing. You have written a wonderful poem for the contest. It's so profound in so few words. Good luck. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    Hello Ulla,
    Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting words backed by Good Luck in the contest.
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP
Comment from Ric Myworld
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With faith of a muster seed, all things are possible. Which isn't an easy task, believing in what we can't see or touch. Although, we can learn in time with trust. Thanks for sharing another fine poem.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    Hello Ric,
    "With faith of a muster seed, all things are possible." Wow!
    I am overwhelmed by your generous and most encouraging review.
    Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting words backed by the most coveted SIX STARS plus Veiled Best of Luck in the contest.
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP
Comment from JennStar
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The poem was good these shorter ones I have a hard time with as a reader and a writer. Trying to build up and create emotions and messages in such a small structure is difficult. That being said I don't read much religious poetry so the message isn't as strong with me as it would be with others.

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 Comment Written 01-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    Thank you.
Comment from amahra
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First, let me say what a great artwork you chose for your writing. I really like it. Also, the poem is very truthful and very well crafted. It's a very good poem for the Four Line Poem contest.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    Hello Amahra,
    Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting words backed by Veiled Good Luck in the contest.
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP