Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

I'm a mystery fan so this definitely appeals to my interests. Will go back and check out a few others. One thing I noticed is Dutton "stated". This would go better with "said". Latest thing from publishers is use said and asked. And they hate ejaculated, wonder why?

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021

Glad you enjoyed this portion of the novelette. Much appreciate the review.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Brett, this is a very interesting chapter and it does move the story along. I would have liked to see more dialogue as it is a useful tool to make it all become alive. So, what is to happen next? Ulla:)))

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 Comment Written 30-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021

Another much appreciated insightful review.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This is turning into quite a mystery. Dutton is interesting character with his ability to since thing and process information faster than other by using his own methodology. I look forward to reading more.

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 Comment Written 30-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021

Another much appreciated review. Thanks.