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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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Good picture, especially as it is so gray and blue, and fun ironic poem. Of course it's a gray day if you are off work. Good luck in the contest. You've picked a topic to arouse everyone's sympathy.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2021

Comment from robyn corum
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Dear Mystery Humorist,

I get it. Although, around here it don't seem to matter if it's a person's day off or not - it's just been RAINING! hahaha

I was complaining that we were never getting to swim in our new pool. Then the rain stopped. We've had about five days in a row without it - and so the pool feels like a bathtub! A hot one, at that!

So, I guess I'm just gonna fuss either way. hahahaha

But - I get your point. You've executed the message well here and kept to the syllable count, too. Thanks and good luck!

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2021


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