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Hope

Things We Hope For

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Without hope we are flawed and your fine words here help us to understand ourselves and others as we keep our thoughts pure and learn from our mistakes, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
    Thanks so much for your comments.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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The problem with many people's lives is they lack hope. One important step they fear taking is to trust, to have faith in others, life, God and in themselves. Without that puzzle piece, the picture of hope cannot be completed.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
    Thank you for your comments.
Comment from royowen
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The reason Jesus lived and died to give us a reason for existence and the most important, "l know the plans I have for you, declares the Lord, to prosper you and not harm, to give you a hope and a future." To give us hope, you have nailed the Lord's declaration in articulate and beautiful words in well ordered rhyme and meter, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
    Thank for your kind words.
reply by royowen on 29-Jul-2021
    Most welcome
Comment from lyenochka
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I appreciate your poem of hope. I especially like the parts about learning from mistakes, and keeping thoughts pure, and trusting and hoping in the love of Jesus. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
    Thank you for your kind words and good luck. I appreciate it.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Things We Hope For
Hope

Excellent entry for the Feelings writing prompt contest. Nice spiritual sentiments. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
    Thanks very much for your kind remarks.
Comment from Frank Jauregui
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Great entry for the feeling of hope. So true that we can find home in many things in this life but in the end true hope cannot be found apart from the love of Jesus.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
    Thanks very much for your comments on my hope poem.
Comment from Boogienights
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There is much to hope for in this life, and you have mentioned some if the best things. If our hopes are realized, so be it....if they're not, then we need to keep hope alive. I think this is a wonderful feelings poem, thanks for sharing. :)

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
    Thanks very much for your kind words.
Comment from Summer Lange
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You put a lot of thought and detail into your writing. I appreciate that and your hard work. I enjoyed it and the ending when you brought Jesus into it. For me personally tho it was a little long. But I enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
    I am glad you enjoyed it. Yes, I did put a lot of thought into it. I didn't think it was long though.
Comment from dragonpoet
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This poem shows all the things we hope for. It seems faith is always intertwined with hope. This is discussed in the last stanza.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
    Thanks for your comments. I appreciate them.
reply by dragonpoet on 30-Jul-2021
    No problem.
    Joan
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Heartfelt paean to hope--fine choice for the theme of feeling--hope is an overarching emotion all can relate to. You made your point in plain, powerful words.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
    Thanks for your kind remarks.