Hope
Things We Hope For48 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your contest entry. You definitely described hope and the things we all hope for. I also enjoyed the rhyming scheme. Thank you for sharing this with us and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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I enjoyed reading your contest entry. You definitely described hope and the things we all hope for. I also enjoyed the rhyming scheme. Thank you for sharing this with us and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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The contest is over, thanks.
Comment from karenina
There is a sweet innocence to your verse, enhanced by your aabb rhyme pattern...
Seems we spend our lifetime hoping for one blessing or another! So many of these things can be accomplished by being kind to our fellow man...
Karenina
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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There is a sweet innocence to your verse, enhanced by your aabb rhyme pattern...
Seems we spend our lifetime hoping for one blessing or another! So many of these things can be accomplished by being kind to our fellow man...
Karenina
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Thank you.
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You are most welcome!
Karenina
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written, deeply thoughtful poem conveys a moving message about our many hopes in life--ranging from simple everyday desires and needs to the soul-deep ones centering around the Lord.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Your well-written, deeply thoughtful poem conveys a moving message about our many hopes in life--ranging from simple everyday desires and needs to the soul-deep ones centering around the Lord.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Terry Overton
Sweet verses. I was able to visualize so much of what you said here, especially the little children and the wounded bird. It is true we sometimes struggle but having hope and faith in Jesus is our comfort.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Sweet verses. I was able to visualize so much of what you said here, especially the little children and the wounded bird. It is true we sometimes struggle but having hope and faith in Jesus is our comfort.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
You writing conveys the feelings you are describing very well. The rhyme is clean and the quatraines nicely contained. It is well done wothout being florid.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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You writing conveys the feelings you are describing very well. The rhyme is clean and the quatraines nicely contained. It is well done wothout being florid.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Jarvis Popovich
Nice little poem about hope and the more. It has a good use of imagery and wording. They're many things to hope for but your right, hope has a name.
Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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Nice little poem about hope and the more. It has a good use of imagery and wording. They're many things to hope for but your right, hope has a name.
Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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Thanks very much.
Comment from mermaids
You have a smooth poetic flow of words and lines. "We hope to feel Jesus close by" is my favorite line. It brings forth a warm feeling to know that Jesus is near us. Excellent poem with an important theme.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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You have a smooth poetic flow of words and lines. "We hope to feel Jesus close by" is my favorite line. It brings forth a warm feeling to know that Jesus is near us. Excellent poem with an important theme.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much. I thought it would be a winner in the feelings contest I entered it in. Maybe it will win the poem of the month contest.
Comment from AliMom
Your writing is so uplifting. One can't help but smile at the joy it brings and at the hope it gives. Your choice of photo to accompany the poem is very good. Keep inspiring.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Your writing is so uplifting. One can't help but smile at the joy it brings and at the hope it gives. Your choice of photo to accompany the poem is very good. Keep inspiring.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Carlos' girl
Wonderful poem. The repetition of " we hope" is a very effective tool here and the surprise of mention of children is so lovely. A delight to have read this refreshing poem.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Wonderful poem. The repetition of " we hope" is a very effective tool here and the surprise of mention of children is so lovely. A delight to have read this refreshing poem.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much.
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Xoxo
Comment from June Sargent
You have certainly highlighted some of the most joyous things in life that we can hope for. During these difficult times, we need to remind ourselves to be grateful for small blessings - never taking them for granted. The laughter of children, the chirping of birds, the scent of roses. Very uplifting piece. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
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You have certainly highlighted some of the most joyous things in life that we can hope for. During these difficult times, we need to remind ourselves to be grateful for small blessings - never taking them for granted. The laughter of children, the chirping of birds, the scent of roses. Very uplifting piece. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
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You're welcome. I didn't win the contest though.
