Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

Great job on this poem. Glad you can be so upbeat even though you have to depend on others. Bless your family for being there for you, and for providing you with a means of moving around.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2021

Thank you for the Time to Read and Review this poem offering

reply by Anne Johnston on 11-Aug-2021

You are welcome

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

I think you did well here in your first attempt at this style of poetry. This makes your reader contemplate several things as they consider how a wheelchair bound person must often wait for help.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021

Thanks for the Review and Continued Support

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Great to see you up and around, dear poet. I'm near blind and know the importance of independence and movement. Your poem is beautifully penned and formatted. I don't think my first anything was this good.

Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for your writing endeavors,
Sally XOs

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021

Thanks for your Support and Encouragement

Comment from T B Botts

Excellent

I don't know poems very well, but I know what I like, and I liked this. Well done. It's good to see that you're not letting your situation keep you from writing. You obviously have talent, I hope you continue to write. Keep up the good work. Have a blessed evening.

Tom

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021

Thank you for the Review and Kind compliments

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

When we become disabled we do indeed rely on family to get about and I hope you will be able to manage to move the chair yourself soon as independence is important, a poignant write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021

Thanks for the Review and Support Ms. Dolly

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job with your very personal poem. Your syllable count is correct per line. I like the use of rhyme. Your words flow smoothly with great imagery. Take care.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021

Thanks for the Support and Review

Comment from Theodore McDowell

Excellent

this biographical poem is extremely moving and poignant, especially after reading that you lost your leg. Well done !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021

Thank you for the Time to Read and Review this poem offering