An Apology to Mother Nature
Many of the things that we are doing that harm Mother Nature22 total reviews
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
I sincerely hope Mother Nature will accept our apologies. We should realize that she is mad at us for neglecting and abusing her think we deserve this global warming. Let's hope and pray that things may not get worse in the future if we don't change now. I liked this well thought out the poem. Thanks for sharing! Good luck!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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I sincerely hope Mother Nature will accept our apologies. We should realize that she is mad at us for neglecting and abusing her think we deserve this global warming. Let's hope and pray that things may not get worse in the future if we don't change now. I liked this well thought out the poem. Thanks for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Thanks. I hope Mother was listening.
Comment from Senyai
Hi Mystery Writer,
Aww, this is nostalgic for me. It reminds me of poems I have written. From the viewpoint of one of Earth's loving children, you address Mother Nature to see if she will find another planet we could use.
Don't think she will do that, but so sweet and so dear :-)
Loved this!
All the best in the writing promp,
Senyai
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Hi Mystery Writer,
Aww, this is nostalgic for me. It reminds me of poems I have written. From the viewpoint of one of Earth's loving children, you address Mother Nature to see if she will find another planet we could use.
Don't think she will do that, but so sweet and so dear :-)
Loved this!
All the best in the writing promp,
Senyai
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Thank you. Glad it brought back memories.
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent poem with a very strong message which I hope many will hear. I don't think we deserve to have another planet - humans, being what they are would spoil that one as well. I do like the way you have addressed "Mother" , as that term is one of endearment and nurturing. Wish we all had more of her qualities when we are meant to be looking after our planet! Well written, and I hope your entry does well in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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An excellent poem with a very strong message which I hope many will hear. I don't think we deserve to have another planet - humans, being what they are would spoil that one as well. I do like the way you have addressed "Mother" , as that term is one of endearment and nurturing. Wish we all had more of her qualities when we are meant to be looking after our planet! Well written, and I hope your entry does well in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the review, Wendy.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
An Apology to Mother Nature
Great entry for the Write A Nature Poem contest. I totally agree with you, we abuse mother earth and we're paying for it. It can get worse if we don't do something about it.
"I hesitate to ask you.( / ) I know you might refuse,
But, Mother, do you have another planet we can use?
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An Apology to Mother Nature
Great entry for the Write A Nature Poem contest. I totally agree with you, we abuse mother earth and we're paying for it. It can get worse if we don't do something about it.
"I hesitate to ask you.( / ) I know you might refuse,
But, Mother, do you have another planet we can use?
Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a finely metered and rhymed write with some well chosen words to make this poem pop with truth and magical melody, I really enjoyed this talented write and it should WIN the contest! Much enjoyed and well worth a six, love Dolly x
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This is a finely metered and rhymed write with some well chosen words to make this poem pop with truth and magical melody, I really enjoyed this talented write and it should WIN the contest! Much enjoyed and well worth a six, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Great entry for the write about nature . Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Great entry for the write about nature . Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
Comment from royowen
I guess God has many names, and one of them is "Mother Nature" yes indeed, one of Adam and Eve's appointed tasks were to be stewards of the earth, but I guess they failed at that, as we have done down through the ages, raping a pillaging her resources like we have. A beautifully written poem in immaculate rhyming couplets, good luck, blessings Roy
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I guess God has many names, and one of them is "Mother Nature" yes indeed, one of Adam and Eve's appointed tasks were to be stewards of the earth, but I guess they failed at that, as we have done down through the ages, raping a pillaging her resources like we have. A beautifully written poem in immaculate rhyming couplets, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
Comment from Jessica Borras
This is a wonderful poem with a sad, but relatable message. It makes me so sad to see what we've done to this planet. I honestly wasn't expecting the line at the end, it actually made me laugh out loud a little. Thanks for sharing, good luck with the contest!
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This is a wonderful poem with a sad, but relatable message. It makes me so sad to see what we've done to this planet. I honestly wasn't expecting the line at the end, it actually made me laugh out loud a little. Thanks for sharing, good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
Comment from RodG
The Speaker makes an apology to Mother Nature for the collective abuses of mankind. He knows there will be reparations to pay someday because this abuse won't end.
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The Speaker makes an apology to Mother Nature for the collective abuses of mankind. He knows there will be reparations to pay someday because this abuse won't end.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
Comment from lancellot
This is quite a take on the Nature theme. It was unexpected and I think it will stand out in the contest. The rhyming couplets form works well and the conversational tone and confession of our sins against nature are hard to dispute. The begging for anew planet at the end was funny.
Well done.
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This is quite a take on the Nature theme. It was unexpected and I think it will stand out in the contest. The rhyming couplets form works well and the conversational tone and confession of our sins against nature are hard to dispute. The begging for anew planet at the end was funny.
Well done.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
