Secrets in the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Secrets in the Wind - Chap 12"A story of loss, deceit, murder and crime
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Comment from Wendy G
Emmy is Hank's wife? And Katherine is Garth's wife? Katherine has now died? I just got a little confused about Emmy in particular, but otherwise the story is very intriguing, and maintains the interest - especially because you always stop at a cliff-hanger! Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Emmy is Hank's wife? And Katherine is Garth's wife? Katherine has now died? I just got a little confused about Emmy in particular, but otherwise the story is very intriguing, and maintains the interest - especially because you always stop at a cliff-hanger! Well done.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Yes, they were people in the last story... I probably should have explained a little more. Cliff hangers are my specialty. LOL
Have a great day! Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
I'm glad that Emmy plays a part even if from long distance! And your Jon character is every bit as despicable as his sister thinks he is. I wonder what shipment they are talking about. I guess Jon owes Mason money and is indebted to him. Great place to stop as we wonder what was on the fax!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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I'm glad that Emmy plays a part even if from long distance! And your Jon character is every bit as despicable as his sister thinks he is. I wonder what shipment they are talking about. I guess Jon owes Mason money and is indebted to him. Great place to stop as we wonder what was on the fax!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Yup! Jon mentioned a shipment to the church, and the farm got one too! And Jon is quite the despicable and twisted man... he lets himself get in places he shouldn't be.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Great chapter! I love the fact that Allie and Garth are each thinking of the other. One little edit: Give the man (a) break. You've given us good information about Jon in this chapter. I'm enjoying this book! Carol
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Great chapter! I love the fact that Allie and Garth are each thinking of the other. One little edit: Give the man (a) break. You've given us good information about Jon in this chapter. I'm enjoying this book! Carol
Comment Written 25-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Hurrah! I am so pleased that you loved this chapter... I like the subtle moments when they think of each other. And Jon... I don't care for him much! Thanks for the wonderful review and stars.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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I can't say I care for Jon much either. Maybe he will develop a redeeming quality??? Carol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Pro-caliber work--brilliant thriller--astounding interwoven backstories and skillful character development. Grabbed and held me start to finish!
You're not so innocent either[?=>PERIOD]"
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Pro-caliber work--brilliant thriller--astounding interwoven backstories and skillful character development. Grabbed and held me start to finish!
You're not so innocent either[?=>PERIOD]"
Comment Written 25-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Sorry Liz....Thank you for reading and reviewing this chapter. I apology for being so far behind in my responses. Reality called and I had to answer my life. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is an interesting chapter with plenty of action and events I can pick up on although I don't think I've read any of this story except an earlier chapter. You also ended on a good cliffhanger, always a good choice. There are a couple of things you might want to take a look at: "God be with you, Cassidy(,) . . . " "Give the man (a) break." I didn't think women harassed a prisoner going to meet a visitor; thought that was guy stuff. I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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This is an interesting chapter with plenty of action and events I can pick up on although I don't think I've read any of this story except an earlier chapter. You also ended on a good cliffhanger, always a good choice. There are a couple of things you might want to take a look at: "God be with you, Cassidy(,) . . . " "Give the man (a) break." I didn't think women harassed a prisoner going to meet a visitor; thought that was guy stuff. I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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From what I have read, it's men and women...inside they act like animals instead of humans... maybe that's because of the way they are treated as well. Thanks for the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
Another intriguing chapter and each time we learn a little more of the background story. Cassidy is in total denial that the man she believes wants to marry her might be ready to toss her aside or have her killed. 'Back at the Winery you leave us wondering what just came over the fax machine. Looking forward to more.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Another intriguing chapter and each time we learn a little more of the background story. Cassidy is in total denial that the man she believes wants to marry her might be ready to toss her aside or have her killed. 'Back at the Winery you leave us wondering what just came over the fax machine. Looking forward to more.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing this chapter. I apology for being so far behind in my responses. Reality called and I had to answer my life. LOL I may never ever get back to writing at this rate.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Susan Newell
I'm not giving you a six because you write so fast that it wouldn't be fair to others for me to use them all up, but this deserves it. It's all over for Allie -- she's smitten and she can't fall back out of love now. You did really well with POV and the writing. Jon is turning out to be spawn of the devil. I want to know more about why Mason is paying for their mother's care. And the shipment must be the order that Darryl placed. What could it be? What will Emmy have discovered about whom? You sure know how to leave us hanging!
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$1000 a month -- I think I'd hyphenate this
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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I'm not giving you a six because you write so fast that it wouldn't be fair to others for me to use them all up, but this deserves it. It's all over for Allie -- she's smitten and she can't fall back out of love now. You did really well with POV and the writing. Jon is turning out to be spawn of the devil. I want to know more about why Mason is paying for their mother's care. And the shipment must be the order that Darryl placed. What could it be? What will Emmy have discovered about whom? You sure know how to leave us hanging!
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$1000 a month -- I think I'd hyphenate this
Comment Written 25-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Well, you are lucky that I appreciate you so much and all the time... the virtual sixes are an awesome gift coming from you and look...I worked so hard to behave and not jump around...No long list of errors. LOL
Smiles, Carol
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Yes, you did a great job with this one.
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I still have fourteen reviews to go but luckily not too many that say "you goofed"... LOl It still takes time though... By tonight, if I can still see the computer screen, I should be able to write.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Allie likes Garth. Garth likes Allie. Oh, oh! Jon and Cassidy do not see eye to eye. It looks like he's warning her but she doesn't want to listen. She should watch her back. Now, Cynthia and Michael are lurking around the winery. With the news about that ancient note about a vein of gold, they won't be letting up on the pressure to sell.
Interestin scenarios cropping up, here and there.
Ralf
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Allie likes Garth. Garth likes Allie. Oh, oh! Jon and Cassidy do not see eye to eye. It looks like he's warning her but she doesn't want to listen. She should watch her back. Now, Cynthia and Michael are lurking around the winery. With the news about that ancient note about a vein of gold, they won't be letting up on the pressure to sell.
Interestin scenarios cropping up, here and there.
Ralf
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Comment Written 25-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Thanks, Ralf
Jon is in over his head and he would do could to appreciate the fact his sister has not "hung him out to dry| so to speak. His time will come. Cynthia and Michael smell money, money, money but maybe we should watch what we wish for....
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
I wonder what the surprise is all about? You always leave your story in a good place for the next episode. I wonder what Jon Saladino visited Cassidy for, certainly not about loving concern, or perhaps underneath that hedonistic desire for good times, there lies a loving heart, sometimes that's the case...maybe not. Great write Carol, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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I wonder what the surprise is all about? You always leave your story in a good place for the next episode. I wonder what Jon Saladino visited Cassidy for, certainly not about loving concern, or perhaps underneath that hedonistic desire for good times, there lies a loving heart, sometimes that's the case...maybe not. Great write Carol, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 25-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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thank you, Roy...
I tried to leave the reader wanted to know just a little bit more... I am so glad you enjoyed the story so far...there's so much more to come.
Smiles, Carol
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Well done Carol.
