Shape Shifter
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I smiled when I saw you'd posted. Thank you for presenting me with something good to read. I enjoyed reading and am pulling for Dutton to catch this guy.
Therefore, at the moment I don't know much to offer you." (you can leave off 'you')
He said, "They don't give (you can omit 'He said,' Just go straight to the dialogue. We know he's speaking.)
Zigler patted Dutton's shoulder. He stated, "I want that sidewinding son-of-a-bitch (the same you can omit 'He said,' )
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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I smiled when I saw you'd posted. Thank you for presenting me with something good to read. I enjoyed reading and am pulling for Dutton to catch this guy.
Therefore, at the moment I don't know much to offer you." (you can leave off 'you')
He said, "They don't give (you can omit 'He said,' Just go straight to the dialogue. We know he's speaking.)
Zigler patted Dutton's shoulder. He stated, "I want that sidewinding son-of-a-bitch (the same you can omit 'He said,' )
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Appreciate the suggestions and review. Mighty kind of you.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Chapter of the Mystery and Crime Fiction speaks eloquently and expressively the order on official case of investigation and progression, and mystery of crime is on a progressive scale of expressive appreciation, well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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This Chapter of the Mystery and Crime Fiction speaks eloquently and expressively the order on official case of investigation and progression, and mystery of crime is on a progressive scale of expressive appreciation, well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Whatever.
