Coffee Cup
Ekphrastic Shadorma 3/5/3/3/7/515 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation, Gypsy.
-A well written poem
with a good topic
and effective imagery.
-I can picture the scene with
the coffee cup, the chair
pulled back waiting for him.
-I wonder if he will be
prepared for the bad news?!
-Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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-Very nice image
and presentation, Gypsy.
-A well written poem
with a good topic
and effective imagery.
-I can picture the scene with
the coffee cup, the chair
pulled back waiting for him.
-I wonder if he will be
prepared for the bad news?!
-Well done.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I really appreciate it.
Gypsy hugs
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You are very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from lyenochka
That's shocking. You told a full story here with the descriptions of the very normal things in life, the coffee cup on table, the pulled back chair, and then the bad news that he would not be back changes everything. Great job with your shadorma poem!
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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That's shocking. You told a full story here with the descriptions of the very normal things in life, the coffee cup on table, the pulled back chair, and then the bad news that he would not be back changes everything. Great job with your shadorma poem!
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much, Helen. Yes, bad news changes everything. I remember the way I felt after my mother died, it was like my whole life changed in a moment.
Gypsy hugs
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And you were so very young! That was so devastating for you. I remember you said, you slept for days.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with this ekphrastic piece, Gypsy. Your well chosen words pair perfectly with the great picture. Your color scheme is appropriate and the message is clear. I like that you leave readers wondering what the bad news was that he would hear. Your poem reads smoothly with great imagery.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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You did a great job with this ekphrastic piece, Gypsy. Your well chosen words pair perfectly with the great picture. Your color scheme is appropriate and the message is clear. I like that you leave readers wondering what the bad news was that he would hear. Your poem reads smoothly with great imagery.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Thank you, Jan. I am so glad you like it :) I appreciate your excellent review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy--there's something forlorn and sad about a picture of an old empty coffee cup; like a forgotten sentinel guarding the entrance to Valhalla--all just shut up now, I have NO idea what that even means of where I was going with this goiter!
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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Another fine poem, Gypsy--there's something forlorn and sad about a picture of an old empty coffee cup; like a forgotten sentinel guarding the entrance to Valhalla--all just shut up now, I have NO idea what that even means of where I was going with this goiter!
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Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Thank you, Mike. I am so glad you like it :) I appreciate your excellent review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
It's like a writer should be, imagery is all about what one sees, not necessarily with the naked eye, but with that inner eye, reading between the lines, beautifully written Gypsy, as usual, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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It's like a writer should be, imagery is all about what one sees, not necessarily with the naked eye, but with that inner eye, reading between the lines, beautifully written Gypsy, as usual, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much, Roy. I really appreciate your kind reviews and encouragement.
Gypsy hugs
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Welcome Gypsy
