high life
a work poem2 total reviews
Comment from equestrik
This is a good write with an interesting perspective on plants. The dreamy picture is really cool and goes well with your write. All the best to you and have a good week.
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This is a good write with an interesting perspective on plants. The dreamy picture is really cool and goes well with your write. All the best to you and have a good week.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
Comment from Paul McFarland
A fair attempt at rhyming, but the last stanza is a little fuzzy. Probably a little more development would be in order. The subject matter certainly deserves a few more lines.
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A fair attempt at rhyming, but the last stanza is a little fuzzy. Probably a little more development would be in order. The subject matter certainly deserves a few more lines.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2021
