Lust
Evil can begin with a passing thought.18 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Lust
by papa55mike
Interesting poem about lust and demons. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images. It's best to let God deal with it.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Lust
by papa55mike
Interesting poem about lust and demons. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images. It's best to let God deal with it.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from royowen
Salvation has always come, firstly by the revelation and a saviour Christ, then by grace, and then the confession and decision that brings us repentance and faith through that grace, the only function that Satan has is serving God's will, beautifully written Mike, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Salvation has always come, firstly by the revelation and a saviour Christ, then by grace, and then the confession and decision that brings us repentance and faith through that grace, the only function that Satan has is serving God's will, beautifully written Mike, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Hi, Roy. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Welcome
Comment from BethShelby
Yes, I think Lust is a spirit sent from Satan to entrap people and he has succeeded in accomplhing that with the help of x rated movies and ponography on the internet. I'm afraid this spirit can be in many placed at on time which make it imposible to trap.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Yes, I think Lust is a spirit sent from Satan to entrap people and he has succeeded in accomplhing that with the help of x rated movies and ponography on the internet. I'm afraid this spirit can be in many placed at on time which make it imposible to trap.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Hi, Beth. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Brenda Henderson
I can see your point. It is a rather intriguing thought. However I was taught when the Devil or any of his hireling's comes knocking at the door; let the Lord answer it. He knows what to do. As Yolanda Adams would say: "The Battle is not ours. It belongs to the Lord." Well done!
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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I can see your point. It is a rather intriguing thought. However I was taught when the Devil or any of his hireling's comes knocking at the door; let the Lord answer it. He knows what to do. As Yolanda Adams would say: "The Battle is not ours. It belongs to the Lord." Well done!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Hi, Brenda. Thank you for your kind words and those shiny six stars. They are deeply appreciated!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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You're very welcome. They were well deserved.
Comment from artisart4u
This is an intriguing story. Word for word and sentence for sentence are exciting and have a person on edge.
It sounds like TV story or a book to me.
I like the picture and the font you chose.
It is a pity, that some people's minds get carried away.
Good luck with it.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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This is an intriguing story. Word for word and sentence for sentence are exciting and have a person on edge.
It sounds like TV story or a book to me.
I like the picture and the font you chose.
It is a pity, that some people's minds get carried away.
Good luck with it.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words and shiny six stars. They are deeply appreciated!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Chilling depiction of Satan setting forth to defile an innocent. Stunning imagery of evil.
My curiosity [peaks=>IS PIQUED]. unless you mean your curiousity increased to the point of reaching its peak.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Chilling depiction of Satan setting forth to defile an innocent. Stunning imagery of evil.
My curiosity [peaks=>IS PIQUED]. unless you mean your curiousity increased to the point of reaching its peak.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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I always forget piqued. Thanks again!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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I neevr maek tpyos.
Thanks for your vote!
Comment from Susan Newell
Mike,
I'm not sure how the old man trapped the demon, but it is an interesting perspective in any case. A thought provoking little piece.
Sue
My curiosity peaks. -- Did you mean your curiosity reaches a zenith, or did you mean, "It piques my curiosity."?
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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Mike,
I'm not sure how the old man trapped the demon, but it is an interesting perspective in any case. A thought provoking little piece.
Sue
My curiosity peaks. -- Did you mean your curiosity reaches a zenith, or did you mean, "It piques my curiosity."?
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Hi, Susan. Yes, I meant piques. I always forget that. Thank you for your kind words and help with this poem!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sally Law
Wow! This is a super haibun of the power of evil. Jesus has more power and can break these chains, even the worst of sins. I have seen this first hand. Sending you my best today as always and my best to you and your family,
Sal XOs
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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Wow! This is a super haibun of the power of evil. Jesus has more power and can break these chains, even the worst of sins. I have seen this first hand. Sending you my best today as always and my best to you and your family,
Sal XOs
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Hi, Sally Thank you for your kind words and best wishes. Stay safe!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
