Jesus Cries
A poem about the earth6 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
Yes, it's a sad state of affairs - enough to bring tears to the Almighty. However, people are beginning to sit up and take notice. Too little and too late, but better than nothing at all. Stay safe. Best wishes, Tony.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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Yes, it's a sad state of affairs - enough to bring tears to the Almighty. However, people are beginning to sit up and take notice. Too little and too late, but better than nothing at all. Stay safe. Best wishes, Tony.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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thanks for reading and reviewing. iI appreciate t
he many stars.
Comment from Raul1
It's an interesting poem. I like the image you placed in your poetry. I really did enjoy reading your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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It's an interesting poem. I like the image you placed in your poetry. I really did enjoy reading your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love the thought process here as so many people to not take responsibility for their actions, themselves or their dependents. One thing I have learned in life is to take responsibility for our behaviour seriously so that we may help others, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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I love the thought process here as so many people to not take responsibility for their actions, themselves or their dependents. One thing I have learned in life is to take responsibility for our behaviour seriously so that we may help others, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars.
Comment from lyenochka
There are many things that must grieve the Lord, especially how humans treat one another even though He commanded us to love one another. I like your focus on how our actions affect the Lord.
For the 1-5-5-9 contest, I count the last line has having 10 syllables. Just FYI.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2021
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There are many things that must grieve the Lord, especially how humans treat one another even though He commanded us to love one another. I like your focus on how our actions affect the Lord.
For the 1-5-5-9 contest, I count the last line has having 10 syllables. Just FYI.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2021
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Thank you for letting me know about the 10 syllables. I will look at that. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Comment from Jessica Borras
Your poem is clear cut, well written, and has wonderful message. There has got to be a better way! <3
Thank you for sharing, and good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2021
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Your poem is clear cut, well written, and has wonderful message. There has got to be a better way! <3
Thank you for sharing, and good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate nthe many stars.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, we as humans have made a mess of our Earth and God left it for us to take care of. We've done a horrible job. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Not only is it good, it makes an important statement. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2021
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Yes, we as humans have made a mess of our Earth and God left it for us to take care of. We've done a horrible job. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Not only is it good, it makes an important statement. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars.
