Comment from pharp

Excellent

Mystery Poet,

This is a beautifully penned poem; you did an outstanding job writing this poem for this Life Without the Letter A writing prompt.

I tried writing a poem without using the letter A and found it difficult for me; you made it look easy.

Excellent rhyming throughout, a very smooth flow, and a most enjoyable read, Thanks for sharing the very best to you in the contest.

Blessings...Portia

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021

Thank you. I got fourth place

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

A well-written poem without the letter A. The rhythm and rhyme are perfect! The poem is catchy. I should think you will do well in the contest. Good luck!
Patty

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021

Thank you. Hope I do well in the contest.

reply by Patty Palmer on 21-Jul-2021

I voted for you!!

reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021

Thanks for your vote.

reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021

My rhyme wasn't perfect though. I used there and everywhere. Thanks again for your vote.

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

Good job on writing a poem without using the letter "a". That must have taken a lot of concentration. There are a lot of things we can love, but your last lines are the most important:
"I love God. I know he is there.
I feel his love most everywhere."

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021

Thanks for your kind remarks.

reply by Anne Johnston on 20-Jul-2021

You are welcome

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

You managed it all the way only to fall at the last hurdle or in this case, word. 'Anywhere' has no place in a poem that forbids the use of the letter 'A'. I am not going to to dock a star because I feel sure yo will change it to 'Everywhere' which is probably what you meant to write.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021

Thank you.I fixed it.

reply by Pantygynt on 20-Jul-2021

I felt certain you would.