Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Your plot is captivating and makes it a very interesing concept and already it makes you place yiur bets on vampires and warewolfs:) Thanl you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021

Thanks so much, Iza :)
I am so thrilled you are enjoying the Breedline. I rarely get reviews, but yours are very motivating. I appreciate this. I feel like this is my lucky day.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This Chapter of the Supernatural Fiction, Stranger Part One speaks in continuation the events plotted, expressed so keenly and interestingly well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2021

Thank you, Alcreator :)

It's great to hear from you. Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for taking the time to read my chapter. Always a pleasure reading your reviews.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

Well done Shana. You've magically plucked out another fabulous tale of wonder, a vampirism creature called Lenny, who hails from the past, born in 1805, but probably immortal like Gina, this is hotting up and becoming very interesting my friend, how you keep coming up with fresh themes is amazing, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : oblivious of what (lie) ahead. Lay?
Suggestion : Eventually Amelia and Lenny's friendship surpassed (anything previous)

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021

Thanks so much, Roy :)

This one took me a while to write, but it was fun. There is a part two to this. I had to split the chapter in half because of the length. Lenny is a new character introduced into the Breedline. He will be in another book in the near future, telling his story called The Vampires in Manhattan.

I appreciate your gracious review and helpful advice. Thanks for always taking time out for me.
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 20-Jul-2021

Beautifully written

Comment from AJ McCall

Exceptional

NO SHANA!!! NO! You can't end it LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Who is this guy Lenny? What does he need the Breedline and the detectives to help him with??! He gotta know that Dr. Michaels is lying, right? Now, I'm not too worried because Jena and them know it's a trap, but how are they going to get past it? I don't like this at ALL! (The situation, I mean.) ANd Lenny considered them HIS kind... that's very strange. He seems like a vampire. And the doctor couldn't be grieving his children like that; HE turned them into MONSTERS. I hope Lenny is actually good. It seems like it but... I HAVE TO WAIT TILL NEXT MONDAY TO KNOW!!!!! *sigh*

I did catch one typo: blond headed

Correction: blond-headed

Well, I'll catch you later Shana! I love reading your posts!!! (And being angry about how much longer I have to wait for the next one, LOL.)

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021

Thank you, AJ :)
Your reviews are now my favorite. You inspire me and crack me up at the same time. Lol!
This will give you answers next post. I had to break the chapter up because it's so long. And you will like Lenny. He is not a bad guy. But he seems awfully suspicious.

Thanks for the fabulous review and for catching my typo. I appreciate YOU!

Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by AJ McCall on 19-Jul-2021

Aww, you're very welcome, Shana! I'm always happy to review one of my favorite posters, LOL. Whew! I'm glad Lenny's good! (Thanks for telling me! Let's just keep this between the two of us LOL.)