The Mask
What the art gave me15 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Missy,
This poem uses line breaks and metaphor, and a little pun to show the effects of spousal abuse. It ruins the lives and souls of the abused. It makes them show a lie to the outside world, which probably makes the situation worse emotionally.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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Hi Missy,
This poem uses line breaks and metaphor, and a little pun to show the effects of spousal abuse. It ruins the lives and souls of the abused. It makes them show a lie to the outside world, which probably makes the situation worse emotionally.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 15-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much Joan, for the review and the much sought after bling of the 6.
I?m smilin
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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Don't mention it, Missy.
Joan
Comment from Ulla
Oh, Missy, I don't have a six to give you for this beautifully written poem. I can see why this picture spoke to you, and compelled you to write yet another wonderful albeit sad love poem. You are so good at those. How glad I am that you're back with us on this site. Ulla xx
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
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Oh, Missy, I don't have a six to give you for this beautifully written poem. I can see why this picture spoke to you, and compelled you to write yet another wonderful albeit sad love poem. You are so good at those. How glad I am that you're back with us on this site. Ulla xx
Comment Written 20-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
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I?ve been waiting for you my friend. No reviews are ever complete until I get yours ❤️
Thank you
Missy
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Comment from nomi338
In order to safeguard the most precious and vulnerable parts of ourselves, the creation and wearing of a protective mask become absolutely necessary. I find it interesting that many of history's most accomplished poets have written at least one poem dealing with the wearing of some sort of mask.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
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In order to safeguard the most precious and vulnerable parts of ourselves, the creation and wearing of a protective mask become absolutely necessary. I find it interesting that many of history's most accomplished poets have written at least one poem dealing with the wearing of some sort of mask.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
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Hello my friend, it?s good to see your name here in reviews.
I did not know that about poets writing about masks. :)
Your review gave me joy!
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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Yes. One of my favorite poets, Paul Laurence Dunbar, wrote a poem entitled "We Wear The Mask" which talks about the need black folks had to wear a mask to hide their true feelings about being oppressed. I later wrote a poem titled "The Mask Has Been Removed" It eventually became the title of one of my published books.
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Is this poem in your portfolio?
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No sadly it has apparently aged out and is no longer viewable. If you would like to view it, i can DM it to you.
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Yes please
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One question. Are you familiar with the poem by Mr. Dunbar. If not I will post them both his and mine.
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I?d love to read both
Comment from l.raven
Hi Missy, I know just what you are saying my sweet friend...so many will relate...
a true love given...just to be held out of reach...taunted...used...drained of your worth...
as you said...a heart shattered
a peace stolen...a mask is put in place...
a pain felt...but no longer seen...
it was all a lie...
very well written sweet girl...I love your poem you...
and I can see why the picture pointed you that way...well done...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
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Hi Missy, I know just what you are saying my sweet friend...so many will relate...
a true love given...just to be held out of reach...taunted...used...drained of your worth...
as you said...a heart shattered
a peace stolen...a mask is put in place...
a pain felt...but no longer seen...
it was all a lie...
very well written sweet girl...I love your poem you...
and I can see why the picture pointed you that way...well done...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 19-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
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My goodness Linda, your review is poetry in itself!! Thank you my lovely poetess!
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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Hi Missy, Thank You for your awesome reply my sweet friend...and you are always sooooo very welcome...
you earned it...love xxoo
Comment from Sherry Asbury
My walls are covered in masks of every kind...years of collecting - because I feel too that many hide behind masks and we never know the real soul.
The artwork is splendid and your poem is wonderful.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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My walls are covered in masks of every kind...years of collecting - because I feel too that many hide behind masks and we never know the real soul.
The artwork is splendid and your poem is wonderful.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Hello Sherry, thank you for spending your valuable time reading and reviewing my work. It means a lot to me.
Always
Missy
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your picture choice and well thought out words pair nicely. I like the color scheme, the picture, and the formatting of your lines. Your lines and words flow smoothly with a good, but sad, message.Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Your picture choice and well thought out words pair nicely. I like the color scheme, the picture, and the formatting of your lines. Your lines and words flow smoothly with a good, but sad, message.Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 19-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Hi there, Jan. Thank you for this kind review 💕
Always
Missy
Comment from duaneculbertson
Wow!
This is a poignant and well-delivered message.
It hits me hard as I am trying to date a Columbian girl right now and I am struggling with my own mask. She asks me for money and I am foolish enough to help her with things, and I smile foolishly and tolerate the abuse. I am going to put a stop to it tonight. Anyway, I love your poem, and the picture you selected is really cool. Where did you get it?
Best,
Dave
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Wow!
This is a poignant and well-delivered message.
It hits me hard as I am trying to date a Columbian girl right now and I am struggling with my own mask. She asks me for money and I am foolish enough to help her with things, and I smile foolishly and tolerate the abuse. I am going to put a stop to it tonight. Anyway, I love your poem, and the picture you selected is really cool. Where did you get it?
Best,
Dave
Comment Written 19-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Oh goodness! I hope you look in the mirror tonight and honestly know your worth. You?ve a brilliant mind and extremely articulate so do not accept being used by anyone. (Sorry just my personal thoughts since you opened up to me)
The picture I found on a site of public domain photos.
Thank you Dave for being such a sweet soul with me.
Always
M
Comment from Begin Again
Amen...
In one way or another, I believe we all hide behind a mask.... Hiding our true emotions or afraid to share the tidal wave that lies behind it. I always love how you show emotions so well with your poetry.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Amen...
In one way or another, I believe we all hide behind a mask.... Hiding our true emotions or afraid to share the tidal wave that lies behind it. I always love how you show emotions so well with your poetry.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 19-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Hello Carol. Thank you for stopping by and leaving this insightful review.
Always
Missy
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's only Monday and I'm already out of stars, which tells me that they just don't give us enough. Then, when I read words that describe so many, most hiding behind a mask of some kind. Afraid to let true feelings show, and unable to change them. So few words, that say so much. Thanks for sharing another fine poem. :-)
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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It's only Monday and I'm already out of stars, which tells me that they just don't give us enough. Then, when I read words that describe so many, most hiding behind a mask of some kind. Afraid to let true feelings show, and unable to change them. So few words, that say so much. Thanks for sharing another fine poem. :-)
Comment Written 19-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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And here I posted on a Sunday to get your 6, well dang it all to hades.
I really appreciate the fact that your name is always in my reviews, 6 or no 6.:)
Thank you kindly, Ric
Missy
Comment from scongrove
Fantastic writing, my friend! :)
Your words are definitely simmering with emotions. The photo brings it all to life. I love how raw your words are. It leaves a great impression and also reminds me of past emotions in my own life. You are a true gifted writer. I enjoy reading your posts. Keep them coming!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Fantastic writing, my friend! :)
Your words are definitely simmering with emotions. The photo brings it all to life. I love how raw your words are. It leaves a great impression and also reminds me of past emotions in my own life. You are a true gifted writer. I enjoy reading your posts. Keep them coming!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment Written 19-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Hi my lovely! Thank you ever so much for the awesome review and the bling of the much coveted 6. :)
Your review touches me, my friend.
Always
Missy