Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

I like your acoustic poem. The meaning is very clear for each letter. I know that the word appeared to me spiritual when I wrote the poem. It is interesting how we each wrote the poem differently.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021

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Comment from Adam Coleson Horsky

Good

This is very creative! I like the style. It describes the theme very well and has a nice flow to it. I think there are a few places that feel clunky, specifically the "To do or have it or not" and the ellipses after "until you." Other than that, very good!

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021

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Comment from AliMom

Excellent

A very good acrostic on the power and consequence of temptation. I especially like the ending "satisfied or repentant and ashamed" We all have our choices to make. Great poem. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021

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Comment from dellsworthpoet

Excellent

A well constructed poem. The language plain, but driving. The subject of the acrostic word was carried throughout the poem. Also a good final line.

Nice. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021

Thank You!