Train of Thought
No way out2 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Money can drive people to the edge, " a simply lie..." should this be (a simple lie..) an excellent read and a great message for all, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Money can drive people to the edge, " a simply lie..." should this be (a simple lie..) an excellent read and a great message for all, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Jul-2021
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Gripping. A fine entry for this contest--stunning narration and ingenious plot for the theme.
a simply=>SIMPLE lie took over his life.
his brain [enflamed=>WAS INFLAMED with regret.
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Gripping. A fine entry for this contest--stunning narration and ingenious plot for the theme.
a simply=>SIMPLE lie took over his life.
his brain [enflamed=>WAS INFLAMED with regret.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2021
