Comment from irishauthorme

Exceptional

I read between the lines and see the true meaning of this acrostic, hidden among the jumbled words and phrases. The whole thing is and expression of a desire to find the meaning of when and where, a stabilizing point where and "Archive of Longings" and a dawn-breaking new world that is somehow more real than the one we live in, and we attain that feeling of peace in the meaning of life.
We are one with The Universe.
irish

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021

Dear Irish, I cannot begin to thank you enough for your wonderful reviews, are you not only read between the lines, but quotes on my other writing in your review. Check this out


For there is a great wheel
as it turns, it will heal-
because Its Maker cares

Look to Him, and He'll show
which way you should go,
and what is really going on

As Autumn winds blow
and the rivers flow,
breaking is a Golden Dawn

~a grand revolution~

That reveals this small sphere
in the brief time we are here,
in this world of hustle and bustle

To your heart hold dear,
those far and near-
and try not to tussle!

That is an excerpt from inn er inside out child,

A fresh, new scheme
Inner (inside-out) Child,

It's something tells me that you were just reading again.

Blessings,
Your grateful, wrong,(and)
Write ; son,

Darren

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

As you know I enjoy alliteration. It is fun to see how creative people can be with s's. There's a bit of a juxtaposition with cheerful words morphing into a darker dimension. But at the end there is a sense of balance. Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021

Thanks again for a couple of great reviews, you are one of my heroes here and I'm so glad to write with you here in this exciting space during these exciting times.


Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

My abstract eye loves this. I like creative presentations. Dear Badger, so good to see you! It's been awhile. Confusion is in the eye of the beholder. I must've had my share of confusion since I enjoyed this.

Sending you my best today as always, and my best wishes for your writing endeavors,
Sally XOs...

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021

Dear Sally, you don't know what a pleasure it is to hear from you. thank you for picking out this particular piece, you see I never quit writing and I've written my second book since publishing my first one already. I'll be looking to publish my second book.
Thank you for your thoughtful review, I have so much more to say to you, but a l a s, so little time! Parentheses my mama said confusion is as confusion does end parenthesis

Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

~ : - D ?°°°

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I am a little confused by this acrostic poem. I am thankful for all the "blessings from above." We are certainly overwhelmingly "supplied" especially if we let of of our nagging and with even-temperament, look for those boons from the Lord.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021

Thank you Helen for this thoughtful revlew. Please keep in mind that I am just coming back from a long hiatus, and am not thinking real clearly yet.
God Bless, as He has blessed me abundantly.

Blessings,

Darren