Just Jim
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Justice For Jim"Lonely woman meets wrong man.
2 total reviews
Comment from Jessica Borras
Oh my gosh, absolutely hilarious! I loved this chapter! And you can bet I'll be heading back to the beginning to read more. The trench coat in the butt crack sealed the deal for me. I literally laughed out loud.
There's one point where Corbin is written Corvin. It's the only thing I saw, figured I'd point it out. Very, very well written. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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Oh my gosh, absolutely hilarious! I loved this chapter! And you can bet I'll be heading back to the beginning to read more. The trench coat in the butt crack sealed the deal for me. I literally laughed out loud.
There's one point where Corbin is written Corvin. It's the only thing I saw, figured I'd point it out. Very, very well written. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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I'm not surprised I the name came out spelled different. My spell check hates me. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from Ulla
Hahahahaha, you silly woman, this had me cracking. This is so crazy that it is funny. I can just imagine it all. Not an easy thing to get away with something as crazy as this. I absolutely love it. I'm still laughing xxx
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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Hahahahaha, you silly woman, this had me cracking. This is so crazy that it is funny. I can just imagine it all. Not an easy thing to get away with something as crazy as this. I absolutely love it. I'm still laughing xxx
Comment Written 14-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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Glad you liked it and laughed. I thought it was not one of my better chapters....but loved the visual comedy. So, I just kept writing. When I started writing, I wanted to write comedy. I'm always drawn to the comedic scene.
