Light Through Window
4/7/5 Autumn Haiku32 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
LOL This is cute. Spiders do weave very intricate webs. I like the picture of the spider with its web that you chose to accompany the poem. At least it gives a reason for not cleaning. LOL
Patty
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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LOL This is cute. Spiders do weave very intricate webs. I like the picture of the spider with its web that you chose to accompany the poem. At least it gives a reason for not cleaning. LOL
Patty
Comment Written 15-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate it.
Gypsy
Comment from elchupakabra
I'm really not a fan of insects in general, so I also tend to leave up cobwebs in certain places to ward off any creepy crawlers. Great work on this piece, thanks for sharing. Later daze.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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I'm really not a fan of insects in general, so I also tend to leave up cobwebs in certain places to ward off any creepy crawlers. Great work on this piece, thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Thank you, chupa Cabral, I appreciate your feedback and review.
Gypsy
Comment from Light Magic
"Lucky I don't clean" - best moment of observation! I wish I could offer some constructive criticism - anything - but nope, this is perfect just the way it is.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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"Lucky I don't clean" - best moment of observation! I wish I could offer some constructive criticism - anything - but nope, this is perfect just the way it is.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Thank you, romani. I appreciate your feedback and review.
Gypsy
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It's a pleasure. :)
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Me too Gypsy. LOL
In fact I'm such a bugaphobe, my nickname is "Bug"
Great autumn haiku.
I like the term "diamond web"
Excellent imagery and I like the subtlety humorous satori.
Take care
Katiemae
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Me too Gypsy. LOL
In fact I'm such a bugaphobe, my nickname is "Bug"
Great autumn haiku.
I like the term "diamond web"
Excellent imagery and I like the subtlety humorous satori.
Take care
Katiemae
Comment Written 15-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Thank you, Katiemae. I appreciate your feedback and review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
The satori line is superbly written. The good punch line. Funny. As it is said, laughter is a brush that sweeps the cobwebs away! Nice accompanying pics. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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The satori line is superbly written. The good punch line. Funny. As it is said, laughter is a brush that sweeps the cobwebs away! Nice accompanying pics. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Thank you, Seshadri_Sreenivasan. I appreciate your feedback and review.
Gypsy
Comment from Senyai
Hi Gypsy,
I really love your haiku poetry! You have mastered them in my opinion. Kigo is the season expressed in a haiku?
I love your beautiful presentation of this lovely haiku, the black and white with the spider webs set the poem off so well.
There is so much more to a great haiku than meets the eye!
All the best,
Senyai
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Hi Gypsy,
I really love your haiku poetry! You have mastered them in my opinion. Kigo is the season expressed in a haiku?
I love your beautiful presentation of this lovely haiku, the black and white with the spider webs set the poem off so well.
There is so much more to a great haiku than meets the eye!
All the best,
Senyai
Comment Written 15-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Thank you, Senyai. I appreciate your feedback and review. Yes, kigo is the word that represents the season. In this one is spider for autumn when spiders are fall is when male spiders go out on their quest to find a mate.
I love haiku form. So much is packed into a few words and it's very visual...like me :)
Gypsy
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Thanks, Gypsy! Good to tuck that nugget of knowledge under my hat :-)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, you made me smile as the spider has free reign to weave his web, knowing he will not be disturbed, I enjoyed the sentiment here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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He he he, you made me smile as the spider has free reign to weave his web, knowing he will not be disturbed, I enjoyed the sentiment here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Thank you, Dolly. I appreciate your feedback and review.
Gypsy
Comment from kahpot
A Ha! Ha! Haiku, I think spiders should clean up their own dishes, love the double artwork effect, excellently written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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A Ha! Ha! Haiku, I think spiders should clean up their own dishes, love the double artwork effect, excellently written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Hah hah...Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Charming whimsy with the punchline--brilliant!--unexpected twist on the poem--stunning and elegant imagery, then POW! The photo (painting?) is magnificent.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Charming whimsy with the punchline--brilliant!--unexpected twist on the poem--stunning and elegant imagery, then POW! The photo (painting?) is magnificent.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Top is a picture, the bottom I think is a painting.
Gypsy
Comment from jusylee72
I found humor in your poem. It was full of tongue in cheek innuendos. Poor spiders we do kill their homes often yet don't want to live with them. Interesting Poem enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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I found humor in your poem. It was full of tongue in cheek innuendos. Poor spiders we do kill their homes often yet don't want to live with them. Interesting Poem enjoyed it.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
