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Comment from Liz O'Neill
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Great choice of the picture. I was listening to a you tube presentation by a psychic woman named Pam Gregory. She said there is much going on in the universe. We also just had some sun spots going on. Both will make us feel very confused. I cannot focus on anything right now. So this is a timely topic.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
    Thank you so much for the wonderful review, and for sharing in our confusion.

    Blessings,

    Brother 🦡 Cull

    Darren
reply by Liz O'Neill on 13-Jul-2021
    ***gallows chuckle***
Comment from irishauthorme
Exceptional
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Your comments are as good as your acrostic! Great quote from Charles Babbage, and very true human situation.
This acrostic is an illustration of where some people are sometimes, and some people all the time.
You have a real insight into the human genome, kinds rare these days.
Acrostics are a good method of expression, difficult but satisfying.
Good work,
irish

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
    Hey thanks Dad for The shining 6 star review, and I appreciate that you appreciate my quote by Charles Babbage. Now Google typos don't mess up in my words, I would like to say thank you so much for your advice today I really appreciate you taking time out of your busy day to talk to me about my problems.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger Cull

    Darren
Comment from Raul1
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. I like your poem. Excellent work! Nice job. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
    Thank you Raul for this uplifting and kind review on my confusion. I really appreciate your warm comments and the five star review.

    Blessings,
    Brother Badger Cull
    Darren
Comment from lyenochka
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Your poem speaks to me about the constant battle among humans in the human way of relating since the Fall and the "constant oneupmanship." A thoughtful acrostic, Darren!
I was reading in Psalm 31:21Blessed be the LORD, for He has shown me His loving devotion in a city under siege.
Take heart because He is faithful to us even while we live in "a city under siege."

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
    Thank you so much Helen for your wonderful review. I was confused when I wrote this and I'm still a little bit confused now but these great reviews have pointed me in the right direction!
    Thanks again I really appreciate your review.

    Blessings,
    Brother Badger Cull
    Darren
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Oneupmanship is not nice, not for the person doing it, (they should ask themselves why they do it) and not for the person it's against. What does that do to that person? Life can be confusing enough without adding to it, we must try to be straight with our family, neighbours and friends. If we can't be iwth them, we can't be with ourselves. You do it your way, Badger. Well done, I thought you wrote it perfectly. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
    Thank you Sandra for your wonderful review on my confusion. I'm so glad it struck a cord in your heart and I'm glad that it came across a straightforward..

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger Cull

    Darren
Comment from Eternal Muse
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A very interesting acrostic on "Confusion". Confusion is emotion that has many faces and often can really screw up our lives. I would pray for guidance (smile) and look for the sun. Sun always comes out in the end.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
    I like how you put sun in the Ferrari & the Volkswagen. Thank you so much for your review on this sketchy confusing writing, I really appreciate your friendship here!