Lone Egret
5/7/5 Ekphrastic Autumn Haiku for Haiku Club Event16 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This specific Haiku speaks vividly a scene of loneliness in a night in a bird's eye view, view is clear at each point of view; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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This specific Haiku speaks vividly a scene of loneliness in a night in a bird's eye view, view is clear at each point of view; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 12-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An atmospheric write and birds can sometimes remind us of loneliness as they fly solo and it is only when they are paired that we have that sense of romance, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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An atmospheric write and birds can sometimes remind us of loneliness as they fly solo and it is only when they are paired that we have that sense of romance, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Hello Gypsy.
Exceptional haiku you have here.
Your use of the word "vacuous" as well as your satori..."sound of loneliness" is the
stroke of genious.
Since you describe no sound at all, the egret's silence is what makes this so special.
I feel you nailed this one.
Take care
Katiemae
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Hello Gypsy.
Exceptional haiku you have here.
Your use of the word "vacuous" as well as your satori..."sound of loneliness" is the
stroke of genious.
Since you describe no sound at all, the egret's silence is what makes this so special.
I feel you nailed this one.
Take care
Katiemae
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem, Katie. I really appreciate the exceptional review and six stars! You are very kind.
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Comment from Raul1
This is a beautiful poem. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Exceptional work! I like your poetry. No grammatical errors. Interesting. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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This is a beautiful poem. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Exceptional work! I like your poetry. No grammatical errors. Interesting. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem, Raul. I really appreciate the exceptional review and six stars! You are very kind.
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You're welcome, my friend!
Comment from Eternal Muse
A wonderful haiku, Gypsy, you are a known expert on the form.
I saw an egret yesterday on a tree near the pond I see from my Florida room. They are so elegant, these birds.
Thank you for sharing, another masterpiece.
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A wonderful haiku, Gypsy, you are a known expert on the form.
I saw an egret yesterday on a tree near the pond I see from my Florida room. They are so elegant, these birds.
Thank you for sharing, another masterpiece.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem. I really appreciate your exceptional review and six stars! You are very kind.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Egrets are such beautiful birds. They are probably like herons who like to be alone. Perhaps the "long vacuous night" won't be too long for him as the loneliness could be a help in hunting. Cool picture!
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Egrets are such beautiful birds. They are probably like herons who like to be alone. Perhaps the "long vacuous night" won't be too long for him as the loneliness could be a help in hunting. Cool picture!
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Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much, Helen. You are very kind.
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