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Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Coffee and Columbo"Lonely woman meets wrong man.
4 total reviews
Comment from LovnPeace
Very funny Offensive to some I'm sure because of language, it has a great flow to it and a wonderful cast of characters. It hits me so true to life in it's interchanges for average folks. Blessings, Barbara
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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Very funny Offensive to some I'm sure because of language, it has a great flow to it and a wonderful cast of characters. It hits me so true to life in it's interchanges for average folks. Blessings, Barbara
Comment Written 12-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Barbara. I appreciate the kind words.
Comment from blondie560
I just came across this chapter so I went back to read the beginning. It is hysterical! I live your characters and descriptions and the way your mind just goes from one thought to another. How old are we talking Zee to be? I certainly got a laugh about when she thought about having her saliva gland moved to her vagina. I'm guess Zee is past menopause. I can't wait to read more. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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I just came across this chapter so I went back to read the beginning. It is hysterical! I live your characters and descriptions and the way your mind just goes from one thought to another. How old are we talking Zee to be? I certainly got a laugh about when she thought about having her saliva gland moved to her vagina. I'm guess Zee is past menopause. I can't wait to read more. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Zee is closing in on 70. But, she won?t even tell me, and I created her. Thanks for reading and the very kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I shall have to go back and find out what happened, this part is fun and serious, a great mix for a book. It's well written, no errors that I could see, and a fun read. Well done! Sandra xx
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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I shall have to go back and find out what happened, this part is fun and serious, a great mix for a book. It's well written, no errors that I could see, and a fun read. Well done! Sandra xx
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Thanks for reading and reviewing, Sandra.
Comment from Ulla
Oh, again you've written a great chapter and with such zest. I loved it. It's racy and it's fun and your imagery is great.
I loved: Iris leaned on me like a Great Dane after a pitcher of Margaritas. Well, I grew up in Denmark, but then again I'm half American and have some loving memories of soaking up a pitcher of strawberry margaritas on the Sidewalk Cafe in Venice, Ca. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Oh, again you've written a great chapter and with such zest. I loved it. It's racy and it's fun and your imagery is great.
I loved: Iris leaned on me like a Great Dane after a pitcher of Margaritas. Well, I grew up in Denmark, but then again I'm half American and have some loving memories of soaking up a pitcher of strawberry margaritas on the Sidewalk Cafe in Venice, Ca. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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My husband had a Great Dane and talked about it leaning on him. I couldn?t resist the comparison. Sidewalk cafe in Venice, California sounds like fun. Hope all is well in your world. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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I can see that. They arelike a wee horse. Oh, I've spent many a great time in that cafe when on stopover bbefore leaving on my next flight back to Denmark. I was a flight attendant for twenty years.
