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Leaving Dad

The decision to leave home

26 total reviews 
Comment from Judy Lawless
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This is a very heart warming, personal story, Mary. It must have been so difficult to go through the pain of silence with your dad. I'm so glad that he saw the light while he still had the time to apologize. And it looks like Harvey was a good guy.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
    Thank you for your kind thoughts and review. Yep, Harvey is a gentle soul.
    Regards
    Mary
Comment from LJbutterfly
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Hi Mary,
This is truly a heartwarming story of life, love, understanding, and death. I admire you for what you did for your dad, for as long as you did, despite wanting a personal life of your own. I'm glad your dad let you know, in his own way, that he accepted your relationship with Harvey. This is a great contest entry, and I hope your story does well.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
    Thank you, I truly appreciate your kind and thoughtful words.
    Regards,
    Mary
Comment from mermaids
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I enjoyed reading your story and I am glad your Dad eventually accepted your moving out and meeting someone. Your true story flows smoothly and held my interest. I am a big fan of memoirs and look forward to reading more from you.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
    Thank you, I truly appreciated your review and kind words.
    Regards,
    mary
Comment from royowen
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Isn't that lovely Mary? There's nothing worse than falling out with a person, I fell out with my mother a few, but one time I'd resolved after a particularly bitter falling out with mum, I resolved to never see her again, but after six months turned up with my sister, it was her way of "making up", I longed for a relationship that was meaningful, but here I am, motherless, she passed away ten years ago, but we're reconciled for awhile. Beautifully written Mary, bless you, you married well, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
    Thank you Roy, I appreciate your review and kind words. Harvey is a gentle soul. Thank you for the rating. It is most welcome.
    Blessings
    Mary
reply by royowen on 10-Jul-2021
    Bless you
Comment from ShirleyT1
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What a beautiful and heart-warming story you have written for your entry to the True Story Contest. I enjoyed reading it, though it was sad, but yet it had closure. I think Harvey is a keeper! Great job of writing!

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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
    Thank you Shirley, I appreciate your review and kind words. Harvey truly is a keeper!
    Regards,
    Mary
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Poignant and powerful--heartrending that he shunned you--heartwarming that he made amends--stunning ending--from which I infer Harvey was deemed "a keeper"! Fine work.

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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
    Thank you. I truly appreciate your thoughts and review. Yep, Harvey is truly a gentle soul.
    Regards,
    Mary