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Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "The Gig is Up"Lonely woman meets wrong man.
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Comment from Ulla
This is a great new chapter to the story. I liked it a lot. As usual it's well paced and indicates action. Found one thing:
How did you intended = how did you intend
All best, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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This is a great new chapter to the story. I liked it a lot. As usual it's well paced and indicates action. Found one thing:
How did you intended = how did you intend
All best, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Yep, didn't catch it. Thanks. Hope all is well with you.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Nice expression:"Cause she's stupid. Her story smells like leftover Sashimi." very original. I guess is a PI investigation gone astray. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Nice expression:"Cause she's stupid. Her story smells like leftover Sashimi." very original. I guess is a PI investigation gone astray. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Thanks for reading my story.
